Awesome

Please continue

HAAHAHAHAHAH! Awesome! You need a good proofreader and native speaker, but AWESOME! One of the funniest yet! Great fight scene!

An excellent story, full of unexpected twists.
I like it very much.

Love the start but you need to correct Razors to Raptors.

Lot going on here! Excited to see what happens with he attack on the hub.

nice
are you making the colonials like the alliance from mass effect by giving them kinetic barriers and stuff like that?
also when will we see interaction between the various centurions and maybe the raiders? it would be interesting to hear the views about things
anyways great chapter, cant wait for the next one

nice
will jann be turned into a godlike being due to the actions of his father manipulating roslin?
update soon

Lot going on this chapter! Really well written and nice pace!

Wow I want to say that I had been reading the story, when I encounter two days ago, and had yet put it up on my favorite list. When the latest update chapter was up, I thought I had missed a chapter or several chapters, until I had finally discover the truth, it was a update. After that point, I will state that the story is great, I do love how the story is developing, and can't wait to see the next update to arrive.

You are doing a very nice job pulling all of different threads together. I also like that we are getting much happier resolution then we saw on the show. The Kara/Sam story arch is especially nice.

Well I have to say that this story is great. I love how you are twisting and changing how the story is being developed.

What is up with the - with the speaking sentences, because its weird, better to go back to the standard " bit.

lov.

Lov!

Raptor, not Razor.
The dino name, not the saving tool needed against beards.