I read two of f ur fics and I love it! I hope u continue to write more!

This was an awesome story it got me excited to read it great job I'm glad he gave up his revenge in the end.

I loved it!

Lovely.

Nice

OMGosh! Absolutely loved it! Vegetal & Bulma are my top favorite DBZ couple! You definitely did a great staying in their character cause that is never easy! So keep up the great work!

Trust me, i really like it. Long live to VB or BV!

I like the way you describe how Vegeta kiss Bulma, by the way n.n

wow

is this story a one shot or going to be more chapter if so i like i can't wait to read how bulma will act when she find out it vegeta. hope you update soon

really nice. loved this. i'm about to read some more of your b/v fic now :-)

you should make a sequel it was good and you left us with a cliff hanger

Not only was that hot! It was very deviantly romantic! Way to go! I was thinking one chappie cant possibly be enough but it was!

Margaret

I liked this. The lemon was not bad, but of course practice makes perfect. :) You write well, but some things bothered me about the format. Look down your story at the first word in each line: they almost all start with "she" or "he". Also, several of your lines could be strung together to make larger paragraphs; having large chunks mixed with small chunks of text makes a story easier on the eyes. But these are superficial matters. Great job on the story.

i know it's suppose romance story, but... when i read a part vegeta was doing something with his flaming hair, i laugh alot :D because i never imagine vegeta with pony tail! LOL

and for the lemon, i think you are doing a good job! i enjoy your story :)

It was pretty good. I got kind of confused around the end. Did he pull his mask off? I think you said he did but then she still asked him who he was.

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