Reviews for Cry
Annemarie787 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I liked this a lot
Youngblood394 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
i thought that Angel was much better than Fang and i found that whole i love you thing when fang was about to bit cheesy and i hated angel in fang i was acutally sad when they thought angel died cuz she was cool in angel
Bingo 3 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I loiked this story alot. I think JP should have ended it like this. I seriously think that he did this so it gives an excuse for Fang and Max to get back together? Maybe that is why he sorta "killed" Angel. (although she isn't really dead)Anywho, if Max ends up with Dylan is the last book I will join in the kidnapping of JP!
Paper Aeroplanes chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Awww. That was so cute/sad/aggravating!

'Kay, let me explain:

Cute, because FAX is ALWAYS cute in my eyes xD

Sad, because they just lost Angel. Also sad because they aren't together and they're both torn up.

And aggravating, because WHY CAN'T THEY JUST FRIGGING GET BACK TOGETHER AGAIN? WHY IS FANG SUCH A FRUCKING IDIOT?

I hate JP for that. HATE HIM.

...

*Cough*

I love the ff though!
azhgirl chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
I wish JP could have written like this...I hated this book it was so hard for me to get through it. I almost stoped numerous times but I kept feeling like I had made it this far in the series I should try to complete it. I thought they were all soooo out of character especially Max and it didn't get interesting untill about the last 100 pgs. Also the numerous typos throughout the book really bugged me because it showed how little care they put into it. Very disapointing but I will still read the final one with hopes of a good ending...this series was so good it deserves it.
Madam Roses chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Continue it please!
South of North chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Now, I really hated ANGEL, and I could rant about it all day, but I won't. I'm just gonna say that three books was enough.

However, I really loved this one-shot. It summed up everything JP dodnt say in the books-how Angel's "death" brought them a little closer together.
Music's Note chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Fang was definitely the most random out of all the books, almost-more so than TFW. But I actually really liked Book 7; it had a solid plot, and a good mix of action and romance.

I also really liked this one-shot; it was bittersweet. You kept Fang's thoughts in tone with his behavior in the book. Kudos.
Ratt9 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
O: did Fang really cry in the book?
brownie.kat13 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Ok, this was very good!

I love angel,although I do believe tht max is becoming a ... I like fang more in this book hate Dylan more. I think tht if u look at it from fangs point of belies, it looks like max has moved on. He's trying to prove tht he can live without max but as we all know, max without fang is like peanut butter without jelly... Tht is the worst cliche I have every used in my live btw... Well, hrs my two cents :D
chocoyum4 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I liked this it was good. My thoughts on ANGEL... hmmm where to start haha. If JP doesn't end the series with Max and Fang getting together would you like to join me and the other five hundred thousand Fax fans in kiddnapping JP and not releasing him until he finishes it right? ;) I thought that it was definatly written better than FANG, but I was still disappointed with it because of the *shudders* Daxness. But your right it is definatly getting back on track. Thanks for sharing your story!

~chocoyum4~
xXxSkyStellarxXx chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
To lazy to log in. But anyway I think in Fang that JP wanted to stir up sum Team Fang and Team Dylan shirts
Yofanfictionlemmedeletethis chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Aww that was sweet, it made me cry. :,(

I forgot that Max is basically Angel's mom, and Fang is basically Angel's dad... Which makes it a whole lot sadder.

I really loved this one shot, I would say it's the best I've read of a story that happened during ANGEL or after ANGEL.
Arrowkid21 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
This was really good. I haven't read the book yet but my friends have already told me everything about the book I know everything except tiny little unimportant deatails. Can't waite to read it though.
Faxisthegreatest123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Okay, so that was just about how I would also picture his POV in this chapter. The book as a whole was amazing, but I personally thought that Max was a bit too... distraught through the whole thing. She was so upset over Fang, but yet she was so willing to let Dylan in? Idk. It was pretty good, yet still a bit dissappointing at the same time.
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