Reviews for Ordinary
emmie333 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This was so nice! I loved it sooooo much!
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
That was unbearablly cute and sweet and adorable and my heart is dying of over expossure to fluff at a time when it was totally not prepared for it Abd I can't remember how I was going to finish this sentence because half way through writing it I got lost in the cuteness. I absolutely adore Arthur and Francis and I haven't read anything this sweet between them in a long time. I'm pretty sure it was when I read Two Weeks of Sunshine... This was so great and I'm do glad that I read it! :D
-Ash
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
My god. That emoticon was sexy
SlythSilverDoeInPJ's chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
This is the fanfic that made me realize that I was not shipping FrUK just because. I had fallen in love with it and hadn't even noticed.

I read this fic in lj long ago and to this day remains as one of my favorites in the fandom. The way the story is written is so captivating, it has just the right words for every moment. I cannot express just how much I love it.

Thank you very much for sharing.
scrambled-eggs-at-midnight chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I read this and was feeling all sappy and fluffy and nice, and then I saw your little face at the bottom and it killed the moment. XD But it was love.

I enjoyed this a lot. Very well thought out and in-character. I especially loved how you defined their relationship with what they DON'T rather than what they DO.

A wonderful little piece. :) Very nicely done.

-Eggy
Artemis1000 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
It's so, so beautiful! I love how you have it require them both breaking out of their cycle to make progress with their relationship and then yes, even falling back into "safe" routine ends up just being part of everything being different.
fairy-hime-108 chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
As a commentary on other fanfics, I find this rather funny :) 'Cause, you know... sometimes it seems that's kinda all people can think of making them do. No drunk Arthur, no love. Le sigh.

As a fic in itself, this is really sweet and has a lot more depth than most of the FrUK oneshots...yeah. But it's really sweet, kinda bittersweet in a way, but great idea and great writing.
TellingStoriez chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Aww! This was really cute
101010101010101010 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
It was soooo cute

You hardly ever see these two so calm next to each other lol

It's hard to find a fic where these England isn't constantly cursing France or France is trying to grope England

I loveeeee this so much
EverythingToMe chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
OHHHHH I LOVED HOW YOU CHARACTERIZED THE BOTH OF THEM!

I'm Very jealous of your writing skills, and this story made me want to write a FrUK fic myself, I hope you write more!
Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Aww. It's so cute!

Very interesting concept you have there! It's true, most stories paint Arthur and Francis as the sort of couple that fights near-constantly…so it's nice, to have them be an ordinary couple for once.

Also, adorable.
Nicole-Dilona chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Um...yeah. I'm pretty sure this is in my top 5 FrUK stories ever, may even be number one. It was absolutley adorable, to put it lightly. I love the way you wrote Francis and Arthur and I'm just gonna say that the kiss under the blanket was too cute for it's own good. Keep up the good work!
Little Patch of Heaven chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Everyone on three now...1...2..3..."AAAAAH!"

So sweet! Stories like this are the reason I have actually come to like FrUK. I can't stand it when it's based on sexual attractions only, or when the the story is only sexsexsex and no feeling in it. Francis may be horny, but he has feelings! And I feel like if these two did have a relationship, it would start off being so awkward that if either of them showed true feeling, the other wouldn't know how to handle it.

This was very well written and showed their screwed up relationship perfectly. And the last line is so sweet. Hopefully soon their relationship won't be quite so screwed up.
ultimatebishoujo21 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Aww
a-hint-of-garlic chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I like this story, it's a little bit different from the majority of the Fr/UK stories you get to read
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