xDDDDD LOL

Muy bueno

Hi. Pretty good story. I am Jewish though so a few things. First off, if you are saying Wally and Barry are Jewish, they would have had to be circumcised. It's not optional. Secondly, during Passover, the Seder follows an order written in a book called the Hagadah, which includes more than just the story of Passover. Still, for someone who is not Jewish, you did a pretty good job.

This was very nice and enjoyable. I enjoyed the conversation between the three; it felt like you were at their table, celebrating the day with them. (I'm not Jewish, so I don't know the rituals or anything about the holiday really, but I still felt like the reader was at the table with them.)

This was lovely work! I enjoyed it very much. Great job!

According to a website I saw years ago that deals with superhero religions, he's Methodist. But that could very well be just Earth-1.

Highly doubt they call it a Bible.

Frankly, a bit disappointed this was basically a reading of scripture. I clicked thinking it would have some retrospection on the event rather than just a reading of passages sandwiched between a small opener and a small ending. Not bad...just...meh.

Sorry. Honest feedback.

the story wasn't that bad actually. even though i try not to read any story involving religion i just couldn't resist;P i'm a catholic (AND PROUD OF IT!) and i also celebrate passover. (at least at my school...which is also catholic. it's not tradition in MY family to really celebrate passover, but still don't blame me)and just in case, wally west is a protestant. how do i know this?...easy i just googled it and asked "what religion is kid flash?" no i'm serious it works, try it yourself:)

Not awful for somebody who isn't Jewish(I am). Just as a hint, in this context, you should call the Bible, a 'Chumash'. I have gone to a Jewish school most of my life, and I have next to never heard it called a Bible and I very seriously doubt the Flashes would have a Torah. I could have done without the pasukim (passages), I get enough of them in Judiac Studies (first period of the day, oh joy.)