Now I'm curious just what colors Beej did get at Carnival. Great story!

wow! I liked this one a lot, definitely gonna fav. good work!

This is one Hell of a story! Such original and scary idea, you got me hanging for breath there!

You have really great plot twists, because when the "future" started, I thought it would be all lovely and smutty, but hoooooooo, it was so angsty! Beej was terrific! So in character with the cursing and shapeshifting!

But common! What about a bit pink for Beej's colors?

perfect Conclusion! A!

I couldn't have loved this story more! Really. I found myself actually smiling as I read the ending, which is impressive as I don't usually do that while reading fanfiction. *faves*

Hi... Since I'm subscribed to story alerts for this title, I received one saying Chapter 8 was posted. However, the link for it brings a "Chapter not found" message. Not sure what happened, hope this helps.

Hope you update; I'm curious to see where you go with this.

Update soon! :]

For a minute there, I thought the chick at the end was gonna be Lydia ;

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

very good chapter! please update soon

Interesting? No ending? What? Please write a resolution...I'm dying to read the ending?

what the hell? I'm freaked I'm reading the last chapter i got to know how it ends...?

I find myself not able to stop reading, chapter after chapter I can't put my laptop down...A

can't wait for the next chapter...

Wow! I like it. original! I wish they had an episode like this in the cartoon.