I think this story is very poetic and beautiful. C'est magnifique! Keep writing! From CutieWoo

This was a beautiful, sweet little piece. Not overblown or melodramatic, just bitter and beautiful and ever-so-Reinette. I'd love to have seen more of her, honestly.

Wow. It's a beautiful use of character. I love how you got inside the character's head without making it tedious or sappy