| Reviews for Lioness Rising |
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   xComeAlongPond chapter 17 . 5/11/2012 I really enjoyed this story! I was a little hesitant that the magic that Alex uses would make Narnia a little too fantasy like (I was thinking Eragon), but it's downplayed enough by the characters themselves. Great job! Aeralinde |
| Shadowcatisajerk chapter 17 . 4/26/2012 Very nice story, it is the first I have read where the original character is already in Narnia before the Pevensies arrive, but is still from their world and can relate to them. I liked the addition of magic in the story, it adds an air of mystery. Thank you for your story. |
| Shadowcatisajerk chapter 9 . 4/26/2012 Love the idea of the spikes in her braid, that's a great idea. It would be one of the places where a woman would have a disadvantage over a man and I loved that solution. |
| nkeuper chapter 14 . 8/15/2011 This has got to be the rudest chapter. What I mean by that, is, it's a CLIFF HANGER! And those are NOT nice! Well written...full of suspense. |
| Nkeuper chapter 4 . 8/15/2011 Two observations: you comment that the White Witch is exactly like the devil on our tails. nice parallel to the Lewis Christian theme. Second observation; you give Susan a devil-may-care attitude with dripped sweetness. Also intresting take on the Pevensie. It seems you are creating the "true" side to the four. Well done. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/15/2011 Magic is always a good skill to learn. :-D At any age. |
| Nkeuper chapter 2 . 8/15/2011 I like this chapter. I think it's an interesting twist of meeting the Pevensies, sort of. We're used to the four being this amazing quad, (with the exception of Edmund in the beginning). So to see a different take on them is fun. |
| grandma chapter 3 . 7/25/2011 pretty well written. one needs to think as fast as you write. I liked it so far and would like to see where you go from here |
| inudoragon23 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 So that's how the wolves find them and chase them through the tunnel! This is very good writing liz! It's your j-staff friend and story artist speaking! I got your pictures posted on deviantart if you wanna link to them [Inudoragon23]. Sorry I haven't commented sooner. This website is blocked on my computer, so i had to use my DSI. |
| readingrox101 chapter 7 . 6/23/2011 Now I know what happened to Alexa! Sorry, I read ahead :( |
| Queen Mcfly chapter 17 . 5/8/2011 Super duper amazing! I couldn't stop reading until the end. ;) |
| NalaTS chapter 17 . 5/7/2011 Wow! Awesome! Loved it! |
| NalaTS chapter 16 . 5/7/2011 This is you review: On to the next chapter! |
| but-dragons chapter 17 . 5/6/2011 :( i dont want it to end :( sequel! |
| Dancing Through The Afterlife chapter 17 . 5/3/2011 Awwwww! Sad ending, but I love it all the same! Thank you!~Princess... xxxxxxxxxx |
