Did you just make a super sentai Reference?
They are the only show that uses the word henshin! (Morphin ) to transform into their ranger suits

Your story flow is way too fast. You need to slow it down and fill in a lot more information. The readers do not know what you are thinking. It would take days to weeks to learn English. The faster person to learn a language took just over 7 days. Even then his words were off a little. Naruto is not the smartest person. It would take him a month, maybe 2-3 weeks with clones. Try again.

it so corny that it hurts

this fanfic needs some work, I mean, kaldur and Jane find Naruto at the same time, Naruto appears like right next to kaldur, after hospital Naruto goes his seperate way, then within two days of getting on land one of which he spent in the hospital kaldur manages to get a job at a museum, Naruto manages to get a tour at the same museum the day he wakes up, and Jade gets a job to steal a gem from said museum I mean I don't even know if your trying

From your footnote I see you mentioned people getting put off with naruto not dominating the dc world or Cheshire having chakra. I think those are fine, but what bothered me was how mellow Cheshire was. There are alot of different versions in comics and tv shows but your version is like is she even a villain? No assassin, especially league trained would

A. let her leave without consequences, seriously if you have someone so talented in the league, highly doubt Ra's would let her go just like that. She still gets "missions" from this chapter, idk if its league missions but like i said Ra's usually keep a tight ship, so i dont know how that can happen.

B. so trusting of random strangers, even if we say yea she felt like helping someone, no way she would go the extra mile and bring them to a hospital and let them stay. Seriously, she's an assassin and thief. Being subtle and manipulative is like basics for her, if she had an underlying plan or purpose I would understand, like she is planning something and all that she is doing is just part of a bigger plan. It doesn't make sense, she should be a bit darker and cynical, untrusting. She said her backstory was basically a young girl who was sold as a slave and were trained and raised by people who are basically specialized criminals.

I know this is your fan fiction and you're right, you can go any direction. You might be trying to set up a redemption arc later for her to be a good guy or whatever. However if you are going to use characters from dc, I think you should portray them as they are and later on if there are character traits you believe would improve the story or just the character themselves, go ahead. Alot of characters us fan read in FF are to relate to what we already know and expand on it. Its just my opinion but this bothered me because I like to see that the dc characters are represented as close to their actual character that was established.

I believe you can improve yourself as a writer as well if you can take your time to move the story along. I dont know if you're doing this for fun or its an experiment but if you have the time fix the pacing a little. Naruto literally just got here and people are talking about their backstory like they haven't gone through shit. Just something to think about, good luck.

This story was amazing. It always stood out from the usual fan service and wank when it comes to Naruto crossovers. Seeing a Naruto criossover that wasn't centered around him being this ooc badass was different and refreshing. Naruto felt like he belonged with the cast and he blended in so perfectly with them. Characters weren't thrown to the background when he appeared. You gave them their chances to shine and even had Naruto himself in the support role.

Too bad this fandom is so toxic. They want the same reskinned story over and over. I hope you can continue this story one day.

I dont know about the contention but I find it hard to believe Cheshire could keep up with 4th shinobi war naruto unless he was half assing.

I don't even care if whoever can use Chakra, the biggest piece of bullshit here is the fact Naruto only comes even with Cheshire, I understand he hasn't used sage or Kyuubi mode but still, he's basically the strongest shinobi his world has ever seen, like the entire world. Yet you're going on as if Cheshire can rival him, even remotely? I'd understand if it was someone like Superman or some shit, yet Cheshire would get fucked instantly.

Great work shame you stopped

You can't be serious. You actually wrote a story using coincidences? Really?

Great chapter. What happened to Grant at the end was hilarious.

When are you going to have Naruto use Kyubis power this chapter would have been good since red lantern was in a structure like a sussano but I also understand you want to introduce some of the dragons

Now I wonder if you came up with that name before they released the name of season 3

Fan Fiction should have a viable reason for the things that exist... If you just give someone you like a power they should not be able to have... Then sure, it's fanfiction. Just not good fan fiction.

Good luck man