This was really cool And awesomeeee

That was excellently done.

Wow ...Just wow ! That was good , amazing , I find no word fitting enough to describe this . But really good job ! Keep it up , you write wonderfuly well .
lazyass out !

Wow I have to say I have always been interested in this pairing. I think each of these characters best represent a part that Kuon and Kyouko would rather keep hidden. I feel that way because even though I think they should embrace that part of themselves if not handled in the right manner they could easily get lost in it as well. Thank you for taking the time to do this though I wish it was a little more than a overshot.

I don't normally review; in fact since I mostly read, I barely even go on my account here. I'd just like to emphasize that because then you'd understand how wonderful I found this story. While I came here looking for an utterly exceptional Setsu/Cain, what I found was even better than what I expected. It's hard for reality to surpass expectations, especially in such a small fandom, but your BJ/Natsu fic was incredible. Thank you so much for sharing!

This one was kind of heartbreakingly lovely, to be honest. I loved every tiny bit. Natsu is by far my favourite of Kyoko's girls, to start, and seeing how she interacts with BJ is fascinating. The way you made them talk and chat quietly and... the bloodlust! Oh my god, seriously, you're a freaking genius, babe.
Oh, and I added it to favourites. Because it was that good.
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it's so sad. i love this one-shot and i think you should continue it, this have so much potential, really please continue it, you can make them fall kin love or something i think no i know it will be a great story. Please please please consider continueing the story.

I really must say that I am very stunned by this piece. Everything fit together very fluidly, and the darker emotions of both characters really showed through. I found myself really feeling for BJ near the end, as well as for Natsu. I will definitly be checking out some of your other fanfics in the near future :)

This was really a yummy writing, short but long enough to capture what needed to be captured. Now I'm thinking that finding a BJ for myself wouldn't be too bad! :-)) And the idea behind the title rocks! Natsu is in it all the way! Good job!

MUY BUEN FAN FIC ME ENCANTA LEER SOBRE ESTA PAREJA.

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Wow. That's a pairing I've never really thought of before and the way you brought them into their own reality works wonderfully for this story. I like how you made them meet, the setting in a smoky bar, the description of how they can both command a room. Spot on Natsu and BJ, I loved it.

Ahhhh I never saw that image as being Natsu/BJ. It was just Natsu/Kuon to me :O But this was so, so good. Ren/Kyoko I ship not at all (Kyoko/Shou and Rengay is the way for me _"). This just...just kinda...makes me wish there was a manga that brought Box R and BJ's movie together. Yummy. Like wow. Loved it. Way to go, you!

Hi, you have quite the imagination. I do find your interpretation of BJ and Natsu fascinating and real. Good job.

I love this scene! It's perfectly dark, and you managed to capture the cold aloofness of them both. Yet, at the end, you made sure that they weren't completely heartless. Let me just say that I loved this story. :)

What a dark pair and yet they somehow fit. Lots of food for thought. Thanks!