This is the best chapter. EVER. The part with Irving and Torrin having an ale brewing face-off was the cherry on top!

hopefully this wont be the last we see of aedan, though its certainly interesting to hear more about mildred

nice job on the aftermath, though theres still a long road to recovery

so the wardens went along with the dark ritual, though i suspect ryan wasnt as lucky as alistair

its good to see the return of the title character

you might want to work on your character introductions, im fairly sure that this is the first time weve actually met the couslands on screen but you treet them like established characters

a mage perspective on the templars lyrium issue is interesting, and methinks the battle for denerim is approaching

its good to see that alyce survived with dignity intact, the teyrn cousland plotline should be interesting

this chapter is a bit hectic, you might want to space out the events a bit better

methinks that irving chose the two because he thought that they would make good wardens, but i doubt that they will go through with the process

i wonder what alyce will do with her taste of freedom, though with the philacterys close by it wont last long

nice bit of characterizaytion of ser ryan, hopefully he and his brother will survive the blight

owain can be pretty insightful, and it should be good to see the warden come back into the story

I would pity jowan, but he earned his fate

while its a shame that the two freinds didnt reunite after the circle was restored, that might be best for the plot