I don't think I've read this before. How have I not read this before?! It's sooo GOOD! Gah! Love it. Unless I just can't remember reading it. I wonder if I have read it, and if I reviewed it if yes. Guess ill find out when i try to post this! Anyway. I need a nap. Thanks for this story. Hopefully I'll dream of rizzles kisses lol. Ahem. Slightly deranged review but like I said, I need a nap. Bye!

that was a bold faced lie lol

I love how you write Maura & Jane! Very easy and natural and beautiful. Thanks.

This is beautifully written. Thanks for pimping your published work- will check it out now :)

Very adorable. Thanks!

Very good ! nice writing thanks for this lovely story

gotta love Rizzles :D oh and congrats on being published! I will definitely grab a copy ;)

this was so good! I love how you write these ladies. Beautiful job incorporating just enough plot into the story. Please keep them coming!

I really liked this. It's quite original.

Hurrah! Also, congrats! Will def be checking out your book-never enough f/f fiction in the world! ;)

Cute !

Really liked it. Very nice ending.

Good story and Congrats on your fiction publication! I'm really happy for you!

I would like to see a version of this story before you removed the British. While trying to write in an America English style you got thesaurus happy and stuck in a bunch of big, unnecessary words. It is a good story. I think if you simplified your sentence structure into more conversational English it would make for a better read.

Nice ending to the ep! Thanks for sharing and hope you sell lots of books. I always love to see a fanfic author succeed in the paper world.