| Reviews for Defiers of Fate |
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   Kenticusness chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 Psst, hey... It's great. ;3 |
| Lollypop234 chapter 11 . 2/17/2014 What else can I say about this story except that I love it! It has a great plot to it, and most off has my fav pairing in it! I really hope you keep up with the story and whatnot |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/22/2013 Great story so far, ADD MORE! Also, it's great to have Cid. I was sad when he died... |
| Musical.Blossom's Strength chapter 8 . 1/1/2013 I really enjoy this story. It's unteresting. And i love this pairing so much! Please continue soon! |
| that-guy chapter 6 . 8/10/2012 Great to see Cid back he was my favorite Wish 13-2 went this route. Great story keep up the good work. |
| CasualFictionWriter23 chapter 7 . 8/11/2012 Rygdea, you're son of a qwark! I wanted to do that too to Fang! |
| CasualFictionWriter23 chapter 6 . 8/10/2012 I think you did his personality great. I can't wait for more. |
| CasualFictionWriter23 chapter 5 . 8/10/2012 Oh boy, I wonder what will happen next. Update soon! |
| 46chou chapter 4 . 8/8/2012 What. What just happened? I mean... Titan? Barthandelus? Are every Fal'Cie after Lightning now? Whaaaaat? Nice story! I hope you continue this! |
| HiddenChaser chapter 5 . 8/9/2012 Your story is interesting and a was always a sucker for this kind of plot. Most of my concers were all ray beat to by the review below. Still, I will see where this is going and hopefully you can update soon |
| erikhet chapter 5 . 8/8/2012 As far as constructive criticism goes, Sometimes Fang's accent comes off as a bit hard to understand here, and it really wasn't hard to understand in the game at all. My personal preference is to emphasize the accent very little, if at all. So, I think you can lighten up on the amount of apostrophe's and shrotened words you use when writing her dialogue, it's not that necessary (and it sort of singles her out, since Vanille (with the same accent) doesn't have that format in her dialogue). Also, you don't need the bolded dialogue; typically that's used to emphasize words or show how strongly the character is speaking, not in regular conversation. Besides that (sorry if I unintentionally offended), I'm liking the plot alot and I really look forward to seeing where it goes. There's not much Cid/Light on here, and I think it's an interesting pairing that should be explored. Keep up the good work, E101 |
| Pinkstar4415 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 You are a great writer! *coughnothisisntRepaatallcough* PLEASE WRITE MORE! :3 You do such a wonderful job! 3 |
