Gee wiz! What a surprise! I almost thought the folder laid out immortality for Ianto because of the cure. I’m always up for an Immortal Ianto take. Nevertheless, I think Jack will move forward despite the paradox and figure out how to introduce the Flyer venom cure, hopefully, without calling attention to himself. I know that does nothing to “cure” for the paradox, but i’m Hoping the Doctor will help with that. Jack needs Ianto right now and the T3 team will be lost without him personally. Great story and many thanks!

Good story...well connected to the others in the run.

Thankyou. DottyWho.

I adore the mini-man-Hub - what a wonderful love nest! I also like the way Ianto figured it all out and explained it to Jack - job well done, Tea-Boy!

This has been a brilliant story - intriguing, absorbing, and so imaginative! Thank you so much for sharing!

Very cool! Makes perfect sense - are you sure you're not a Time Lord in hiding? Do you own an old pocket watch by chance? Cos you know this stuff a little too well for today's level of human intelligence. I may have to report this to the Time Agency...

This is an amazing Owen that I've never met before - who knew he had it in him to actually be human? I'm quite impressed that you were able to find this man.

Please don't take Jack away! Please!

Or, make Ianto immortal and take them both, but please don't separate them for 3000 years!

I'm actually quite nauseated reading about what this creature did to Jack - your mind has a demented quality to it, my friend!

Oh my God, I could feel my skin crawling and my body clenching with pain as I read this chapter! It's so frightening! Poor Ianto - he must be so absolutely terrified, and then to have Jack weeping over him just breaks my heart! I don't know if they're tears of relief or pain or sympathy but it's heart-breaking!

Thankyou. DottyWho.

This is a wonderful story, You wrote a complicated, intelligent plot very successfully! And the emotions were spot on. I didn't mind the harshness at all, but I always appreciate a happy ending, which you wrote beautifully. Amazing writing, thank you!

I LOVED this, so nice to see you doing Torchwood again.

Do we get a sequel?

:)

Fantastic conclusion. Tied everything up nicely. Loved it. Read the Corwall story and loved that too. Thank you.

Yay, happy ending... and not soppily sentimental either... can't wait to hear of some exploits in this room of Jacks, you know just to keep us amused... This is brilliant as always and thank you for sharing.

Great ending. I really enjoyed this whole series, and yes, my last comment here was a compliment. Bad things happen and when well written are worthy of being read. Thanks for sharing!