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   Orange Shine chapter 1 . 2/19/2018 I really enjoyed your story, so s/7658673/1/Matt-s-Punishment Just to let you know, your work has been copied. :/ |
| Artistically Insightful chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 This is just so perfect I could cry! Thank you for this amazing story. |
| peonyfics chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 Shikamaru, u r one hell of a kinky man. Naruto was so hot and cute I was squealing. Uke Naruto is the fucking best. |
| Karai Dragneel chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 Omg best lemon ever |
| DnMikado chapter 1 . 6/14/2016 This was great! Love shikamaru! |
| Kid Panther Lover chapter 1 . 6/6/2016 Punishment. My favorite, no matter what. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2016 Gai sensei and iruka sensei |
| aspyn1422 chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 This story was fantastic I've been looking for one like this for along while and haven't been able to find one. When I found this I was ecstatic still am I love it! Your writing style is amazing you got the characters perfectly or as closely as one can get. I want to ho crazy about how much I love this and I would love to see you write more because you are an amazing writer! |
| HolyCoconut93 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 This was only you SECOND lemon?! You have gift! You have been blessed with amazing lemon writing skills! Oh my goodness! Amazing! |
| renderedobsolete chapter 1 . 10/19/2015 Well! Someone certainly knows how to incorporate sex toys into lemons! |
| Thedevilsangel chapter 1 . 10/6/2015 OHMYMOTHERFUCKINGGOD! HOW MANY TIMES DID HE FUCKING CUM?! I MEAN THAT IS BEYOND HUMAN LIMITS! BUT HOW THE HELL SHOULD I KNOW I'M THIRTEEN GOD DAMMIT! THAT WAS THE MOST INTENSE SMUT FILLED FANFICTION ABOUT MEH OTP EVER! I WANNA READ MORE! I NEED MORE YAOI IS MEH DRUG! LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLZ! |
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Amazing! I love it a lot! |
| Ezakike chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 I love your one-shots. Can you do another Gaara/Naruto though. You could have them on the run because they merged with their demons turning them into hanyous. That would be cute. A nine-tailed kitsune hanyou playing a prank on a tanuki hanyou and then being 'punished' for it. That really would be cute now that I think about. anyway love this story and also 'sand'. That one was awesome to. |
| potato chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 Naruto's revenge! Plez? Plez with chez? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 This is the first shikaNaru I've read and it was amazing! |
