| Reviews for Alternate Path |
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   GamerJay chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 Though it has it's flaws, I like this story; especially how Kurai makes Kotonoha feel good about herself. :-) |
| MidnightDarknessKat chapter 5 . 9/12/2011 keep it up! |
| Iden-Shelby chapter 5 . 4/6/2011 Hey love your story and OC, please update as soon as possible. Can't wait to read more. |
| Tiffany chapter 5 . 4/4/2011 Hey your story is great. Love your character and his dedication to Kotonoha. She deserves better! Keep up the work and please continue! |
| Mike the Remnant Paladin chapter 5 . 3/15/2011 awesome story my man! i like your character for his dedication and love for Kotonoha. I wonder what Sekai and Makoto were doing though...*thinks dirty* XD. honestly, keep this story going! and if you'd like, you can check out my School Days stories. can't wait for the next chapter! |
| mi55sin chapter 5 . 3/10/2011 I just finished reading all five chapters and I agree with Kamen Rider that the story does seem a little rushed. Maybe you could slow down with the pacing. It seems like more and more ppl are creating OCs for Kotonoha and I'm glad that more ppl are doing so because Makoto Itou is such a jerk. Btw, isn't Otome Katou not Otome Higarwu (or something)? |
| Kamen Rider Chrome chapter 5 . 3/10/2011 Note: Itou is a bastard. BTW, in Tvtropes, this is called a Rescue Romance. |
| Kamen Rider Chrome chapter 3 . 3/4/2011 Well, if you can keep them coming, I'm not complaining, if you're on a roll, I mean. |
| Kamen Rider Chrome chapter 2 . 3/4/2011 Seems a bit fast, oh and Sekai and Makoto are in class 1-3, not 1-1. Kotonoha is in 1-4. |
| Kamen Rider Chrome chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 Short, and needs more of a backstory. But looking like a good start. |
