I really love your story. I. Can't stop reading it.

I'm glad miyoko changed her mind about a. I really wished that kyoko could get over her past, she'd be much happier.

This is a great story. I love how they pulled one over on her mom and who ended up in prison. yay. Thank you

There's gotta be a way to stop her so called mother.
I'm glad that Miyoko decided to stay her friend. And I hope she gives Kuon a chance. She really needs someone who truly loves her. Can't wait to see her take on Sho. Great job.

I would say this fic captures the spirit of Skip Beat! really well. Definitely a fun read so far

I really loved reading this fanfic. Thanks for writing it.

wow, this story is amazing! twists and turns, runaway plot bunnies, yakuza, the works! it was absolutely wonderful to read! and that ending!

I love this story! very heartfelt. your authors note on this chapter, referred to it as being "sleepy." yet, everything in this chapter drew me in, made me laugh or cry, as intended. your writing is astounding, and this story is wonderful!

Love it

Please disregard the prior review that I submitted. I read entirely too much, lol and posted to the wrong story. 8

This is your story and it's a good one. Don't let some anonymous troll take that away from you. You should write what you want to read. If you end up sharing it with others, so much for the better. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. Personally? I happen to like your stories, they are very creative and interesting. The fact that you have more than 700 people reading this particular story and one idiot, should tell you a lot. It really doesn't matter what that one person thinks because they have more than 700 others that disagree. ️️ *Hugs* I hope your feeling better. BTW Wonderful chapter. I see that Kyoko is getting herself squared-away.

I absolutely loved this story. We finally found out what Lorys connections were, the same with Sebastian. I love how mature and caring Sho was, it's nice to see the good side of him. What you did with Kyokos character was fantastic. Being the method actress that she is really served her well. You did a fabulous job with this story and I thank you so much. P.S. I love Eiji, he's a great character maybe we'll see him in more stories now that he is friends with Kyoko and Kuon.

I have never given a review to any of the stories on here but I felt that yours definitely deserved one even though I have yet to finish it. No clue why but I've always loved the idea of characters being in disguise as someone else despite many seeing it as cliche. The main thing that really caught me by surprise (which is rare cause I'm very good at predicting the events in stories) was how you managed to make me think twice on which OC Kyoko was in the first few chapters. Of course I considered Z to be the most likely but at times you made me wonder if it was actually Miyoko who was Kyoko. That was a nice change since all the other disguise stories started with the main character going into his/her disguise and stating their reasons for it which brings me to another characteristic that I liked. It seems like the reasons for going undercover are always flimsy and aren't well thought about, but you made it seem so in character, believable and practical that I wouldn't be surprised if it actually happened in the manga. I really should've waited until finishing the story before reviewing but I couldn't help myself. Even though you probably won't see this review the story being that your profile said hiatus let me tell you that you are a really astonishing author with brilliant sentence variety, punctuation, and diction. I absolutely admire your writing style (much better than mine though that isn't saying much). Once again, love the story and am off to finish it in my free time!
P.S. Random thought but it also interests me how Z's physical description seemed a lot like Sho's.

Best regards,
Maria Daniel

So much cheese! I love happy ending

*white slavery thought miyako was Japanese heritage (why the Japanese name then?)