This is really nice :) Heartwrenching but really well written! Good job!

So sweet! Touched my heart! I love this :D Good job!

This was so sweet (:

I don't need cookies, I need a handcerchief. (did I spell it wrong? XD, to bored to look it up) I wonder if this is a 'what if' story because I don't think he really realised what he had until Ariana was dead. But so beautiful in sweet way!