This is the best Hans Landa's fanfiction I've ever read.(And I have read like 20~30 of them)Every time I go back to this story I find new aspects which touch my appeals me the most is the balance of Greta's vulnerability and her love for H are amazing in writing stories.(the words bring a lot of vivid image in my head)

By the way,I don't quite understand when Greta said "the man who blindly reachesthe man whom is blind."I guess it's something interesting but since English isn't my first language, sometimes I just can't grasp the meaning.

Again, this is an wonderful you

This is what I am talking about there the fire and passion is; I was a hasty in my assumption; apology. Well done!

Hi there. I am sorry if my words are too harsh; everything about the story is flowing nicely; but something seems missing; and I descoverd that it lacks passion; perhaps more detailed of him torture ring her with pleasure pain sensual love making; for even suggesting to divorce him; and her becoming totally submissive to the domi ant pleasure only he can give her. All in all he is a "Hunter"?

What a delight to find a new chapter! I hope it won't be as long a wait for the next one. I'm anxious for that baby to be all right!

I think I was ready to favorite this story by the second chapter just because of your writing style, but I decided to wait and see how the story panned out over the remaining chapters. Now that I have gotten up to speed on things, it's going to be difficult waiting for what happens after that cliffhanger.

As I said, I really enjoy your writing style. Little things, like your use of parentheses. Your lovely descriptions. I wish I could cite every line that inspired me, but that would take a while. The descriptions of the boy's skin, of Hans's hand trailing down her spine on the night of her birthday... I feel like you find new ways to describe things. There's something so true and real in the way the characters interact and perceive things, but it's like you're shining a new light on everything- arranging words into unconventional combinations that describe things in such an understandable way. It's poetic. And I'm so happy to have found this story not only for an interesting plot, but for the surprise of having something to inspire me to experiment with my own writing, to find the best way to communicate my own stories.
I can relate to the message you posted before the last chapter. I am currently working to move past my own struggle with negativity and lack of motivation. Every time I get an email about a new follower for my (only) story on this site, it's like a little shock of electricity, trying to bring me back to life. And this story has had the same effect.
I hope that, perhaps, this review could inspire you to post another chapter soon, but I won't assume I have that much influence. ;) I do hope that you understand my appreciation, though. Thanks for the good read!

Very interesting! I hope they'll be ok. Please update soon!

Hey! Don't give up and you are really an inspiration! Your depiction of Hans is probably the most realistic "post-film" version. Thanks for the life update and I sincerely hope that you will update when you are ready again!

So I read your "A Thank You" chapter that you recently put up. I'll admit, I was amazed when I saw that you'd updated because the story had been stagnant for so long (yes, I'm an original follower of this story from three years ago).

Anyways, I am glad that life has turned around for you! We all have negative changes in our life, and, tacky as this sounds, "For every hard patch you can pull through, there's always a sunny side at the end." XD

I'm excited you'll be adding to this story in the future and I wish you the most genuine of luck! If there's anything that this world needs, it's people who are alive from their passions. Knock 'em dead!

I'm so glad you bothered to update this message here. Like CanadianDarkFox said, most of us are understanding. :)

Thank you for this amazing fic.
I wish you the very best,
Dany

I'm so glad you've returned, your writing has always been worth the wait. Please know that most of us understand and are very thankful you've returned to us. Personally thank you for providing me an escape for the harsh realities of life. So once again thank you.

CanadianDarkFox formerly TonyAnna77

Ps. Good luck with your new chapter of life.

I love this fic! Please update!

This is the most beautifully written fanfic I've ever read. When I was reading your fic I felt like I couldn't read fast enough to get to a new part of it. You have a wonderful way of describing things.

I absolutely love Greta's character, you have made her flesh and blood, and it's easy to identify with her.

I noticed it's been long since your last update, but I sincerely hope you'll continue wiriting this story some day. :)

This story is one of my favorites and I thank you for still updating. I love your writing style and the relationship going on between the main characters. The dialog is perfect, not to much and not to little, and yet what needs to be said is said. I like that. Keep up the great work!

I read this fic awhile ago and it was so beautifully written. Please, if you see this, consider writing more. Either continuing this story or writing another. ;-; it was fantastic.

Wonderful! Please update!