Your writing is beautiful, I believe you were IC the whole time. I did however feel a little lost and bored when I was reading, what felt like I had seen a million times before on T.V.. It feels official, and I like that sometimes. next- your Jean Havoc story. :P

I loved this! It was so sweet, and I agree with you, Edward probably did have some off-screen breakdown moments! Great story, it gave me these...happy feels! Absolutely fabulous!

Oh my gosh, this was simply amazing! I loved the way you captured their relationship, it was just so beautiful! You did a great job on this ;)