That was a really sweet sad story and i really liked it! :D i listened to the song whilst reading it too (admittedly i had to replay it like 500 times since i read so slow _) but fufu~ so sweet! i like it when Lavi and Yuu are portrayed like this. :) it's just the ending was a bit...exposed for my liking. But ah well!

Your grammar was a bit off in places but that's alright coz i got the idea. ;D

ahh~~ what a brillian story D i swear, i love the way you write it is brilliant ! the way you express your characters emotions,man.. you are really good.

but i cant understand why you have so litte reviews (

Really sad, but it had the cutest ending ever. 3333

It was great! With a nice twist at the end!