Really...with that ending?

Personally, I’ve enjoyed the Kato plot line. I think you might have made him just a tad overpowered, but I loved Sookie tricking him. The way it was revealed through Eric’s eyes was masterful writing. It can be difficult to juggle bad guys on so many fronts, QSA, Niall, Kato- but I think you are doing quite well with it.

Wow, this is excellent. I do hope you decide to finish it at some point. I am truly enjoying your exploration of Magicks and Bonds in this universe. I also love that Eric hasn’t been neutered by his love for Sookie and that Sookie is so smart and resilient. I was looking forward to Niall trying to mess with her memories. I’d also love to see Bill get staked.

I really hope you’re going to come back to this story. While a reviewer might not have like what you’re doing, I think you’ve overlooked the fact that a helluva lot more like it and want you to continue it.

Just came across this story and yes I did read it all in one sitting. But I see it’s been years since you updated so I have to question if this story is dead?

Just read your stories again and would like to thank you for your vivid imagination! Sometimes I still hope you'll finish your adventures with Eric and Sookie... Your tales are thrilling, stirring, charming - in short: awesome! Especially your humor is captivating. It's really sad you abandoned your writing, at least at and but where ever you are: Good luck and be safe!
Claudia - your fan from Hamburg/Germany

I do hope at some point you will pick up this story again. It is so good and it is becoming one of my favorites and has such hope for it. I know it has been a long time, but you never know I guess and can only hope your muse comes back and you revisit this fanfiction.

I do hope this story is continued at some point. It is soooooooo good! I hope the muse has not left the building for you and you are able to resurrect this story to a completion. It is becomimg one of my favorites. Also as a side note have you ever considered on expanding the Club Ocella story? I know it was meant to be a short but really it is quite an excellent story as well and could definitely go more in depth and have my vote in how good it would be.

Uhm, where is the rest of thus story? You were on a roll...

This was great. I really wish “helpful” commenters would keep their negativity to themselves and stop ruining great authors. It’s too bad so many great fics end up abandoned because people can’t just close the tab if they no longer like it. Thank you for all the work you put into this. It really gave me tons of happy.

Yet another well written but abandoned fanfic :/

I know this story is not finished and you have published a chapter in a while, but so hope that one day the story is completed. The original story idea was really good and yes while you had that feedback which you noted in the last chapter I think they fail to appreciate the uniqueness of The storyline and the plot itself. While Kato presence has been fleeting his character served a purpose to demonstrate Sookie individuality as a character and she is evolved as a person from the different experiences between Niall and Eric.

Oh, my goodness! You have me on the edge of my seat. I'm SO looking forward to Chapter 24.

Please ignore the haters; truly appreciative readers can critic without tearing down, and review without reviling. With a talent such as you've exhibited, you may want to learn the difference really quickly, or you're going to spend a lot of time needlessly second guessing yourself. Remember: "Those who can, do. Some who can't try to tear down those who can." Well, okay, I paraphrased that a wee bit, but it suits :D !

Thank you for your story. It's delicious.

The Watcher is your "first attempt at writing?!" You must be a writing savant, because it is top notch.

Congratulations!

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