Oh that is priceless thanks I had a very good laugh thanks for a very good read

okay, yes. yes! ex-cellent!

Omigosh I am laughing so much right now! Please do more! :D

hehe you're so very funny

Ohmigosh I laughed so hard at this story. Very cute, and very funny. I was slightly confused at the end, but I loved it nonetheless :)

The guy on payroll? Huh? You mean Jane?

Okay, that was great! I love them, the best team ever!

Thank you for posting!

Cho and a puzzle... :D

Very funny and cute:D

Couldn't stil laughing (: thankss for making my family think im insane by laughing at an ipod screen :D brilliant (; x

this is too cute! I loved Cho's reactions :) Good job :)

This was great, thanks for sharing. Very in character.

Hahaha :)

very original and funny :)

Oh, I liked that! A great distraction from what I'm supposed to be doing, which is starting a paper. Oh well, space and time can wait. (Although there's that saying, time waits for no one. But whatever.)

And here I was thinking that Red John had been assigned to paint them.

"The way you're supposed to know everything else." She explained. "By listening to me." :D I think that gets the line of the year award. Or at least of the month. If men always listened to women, we wouldn't have any problems. :D

I bet Lisbon's the one who handcuffed Jane, and that he secretly enjoyed it. (See how you're corrupting me?)

I bet Jane wanted to poke Lisbon with a hairpin for the entire duration of the trip.

I'd like to know how he has a key to Lisbon's car. Now, is this the Mustang, or the state issued SUV?

Jane probably does have pictures of Lisbon in his car. :D

I feel sorry for Cho, what with all the sexual tension in the room.

Defenestration Jane WIN. :D And love Lisbon's quip about the paramedics. Jane should know by now that she means business.

I wasn't expecting the last bit about the actual painting at all! Yay for not seeing the ending! That's the mark of a good writer.

The "which Virgil" part reminded me of something my dad would do. Or Jane. Both would say that "which Virgil" was a mere technicality. :D

Great job! But now I really must go and start on that paper. But at least I'm amused now. :D

Update soon!