| Reviews for An Earlier Intersection |
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   Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 15 . 6/21 I love this fanfic |
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/17/2017 great ending |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/4/2015 Honestly if I didn't know better, i would think that this was actually a part of the show which is amazing and it also makes me wonder why on earth they made zuko betray Iroh and katara like he did would have been even better if they joined the gaang after 'The Chase' |
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/12/2015 Great story |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 15 . 12/3/2014 Great ending for a great story. I have to check out the story you mentioned! |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 14 . 12/3/2014 Oh yeah! Badassery! :D |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 12 . 12/3/2014 OMG I love the ending! *squee* very well written scenes! |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 11 . 12/3/2014 Toph must have broken out! Or maybe Katara since she sensed a water source? I'll keep reading to find out! Great chapter! :) |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 8 . 12/3/2014 I've loved this story up to this point, but I felt that in this chapter there were way too many scenes that were "telling" not "showing". For example, its one thing to say: "Katara and Zuko tried telling each other jokes" and it's another to actually write out the jokes that they say and their reactions to them. Sometimes the characters talk to formal as well. For example, at the end Katara says a very un-Katara-like expression: "it's most invigorating." I cringed at that line, lol. The rest of it was good :). Thank you for not making their relationship move too fast! |
| tlyxor1 chapter 15 . 12/2/2013 Enjoyed |
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/28/2013 I can't begin to tell you how awesome your story was. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writting! |
| TophFan chapter 5 . 10/22/2012 NOOOOOOO TAAAANNNNNGGGGG BRAEHURELGIUAERILHGAEILLGAHE RU WHHYYY! I actually *liked* this story |
| Atem's Sister Atea chapter 15 . 5/4/2012 This was an AWESOME STORY! ! Are you going to write a sequel to this? There's still the matter of defeating Fire Lord Ozai... |
| ChinkyBella chapter 15 . 4/12/2012 Aww I wanted them to kiss again :( but other then that lovely story! :D |
| Mad Zia Magdalena chapter 15 . 1/4/2012 *APPLAUSE* Vundabar! Wonderful! Nice story. I like the writing and the switching povs. What are you talking about, "not being good at action scenes" It was great! I like your style of battle scenes because it gives you just enough to visualize it, and gives you plenty of room to imagine with! I just wish I could have heard a few more of those Ba sing se conversations. Zuko was really formal and polite, so I didn't get an amazing feel for that scene. The characters were very well portrayed. I like all the changes you made to the plotline. The taang moments were a little too optimistic though. Toph has a crush on Sokka and there is no Suki yet to discourage her. And I think Aang would have been a bit more possesive of Katara. You know, less willing to let it go. Also, the change in Zuko's character, was it that spiritual disease like he got in Ba sing se after Lake Lagoai in the actual show? Overall, nice! 8 out of 1o |
