Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heir of Sword and Staff
Dragon1212 chapter 16 . 5/20
Do another chapter already
Guest chapter 16 . 9/12/2019
Another unfinished gem. Sigh...
sthrobbins chapter 3 . 6/28/2019
Oh, please. Not another fainting, diaper-baby HARRY.
ordinaryguy2 chapter 10 . 6/15/2019
You said you wanted to hear about more HP/HG stories. Well, I wrote a good long one a couple years back called 'The Day the Dursleys Came to Hogwarts'. It starts at the beginning of the First Task when the champions are suppose to have a chance to meet with their families. Snape brings the Dursleys to see Harry. Hopefully you haven't come across it yet.
Now, I thought this was suppose to be a HP/HG story, but you have all these girls popping up. I could be confused, I am sick with pneumonia and am only now getting some higher brain functions in place. Thank God for spellcheck.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/11/2019
More stupidity
Guest chapter 13 . 5/11/2019
The story was more or less good, then you do another stupidity. The betrayer and rapist get forgive by Harry’s mon, the same one he help to kill. You really are a bigot gay moron
Guest chapter 8 . 5/11/2019
No, it is not any pretty. It is just stupid, it show how moron you are. Beating malfoy or Ron or another guy is ok, beating a girl is just stupid and it show your real you another gay girls hating. MORON
keitaropurple69 chapter 16 . 5/11/2019
i love this story very much, and it is very original, but i was wondering if you were going to add anymore chapters to this story or not?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2019
Hmm you AN tel everything that is need to be said. Clearly you toke someone else story and make it a mokery not that i read the original but this is getting borring plus a lot stupidity from your part
stacygrrl2002 chapter 12 . 12/12/2018
I really like lunar harmony, unless Luna is depicted as a crazed mischievous horny airhead
stacygrrl2002 chapter 3 . 12/11/2018
You said you edited about Lily, but last chapter in the blood results still show a matriarchal link. Lily from a line that squibbed ( I hate that word as bad as muggle)? Bound together in death? Hope Harry can't feel Tom in hell
Hp looovvvvaaaaa chapter 16 . 6/27/2018
MORE NOW!
jackmylad 2 chapter 4 . 5/23/2018
in the /N You were going to say find out next time on Dragon ball z
Irishluck2929 chapter 16 . 2/27/2018
Please update it's a really good book
kidterminator chapter 7 . 2/2/2018
The sarcasm in Chapter 7's Author's Note is almost palpable when you talk about King Arthur.
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