Very good story! I liked the ending too. Thanks!

Great! The writing has been fantastic, and I love it!
(Also, something to add to my review of Out of the Ashes' last chapter-I loved Goren's proposing twice, Ross losing and being put as captain somewhere else, all of the department plus the higher brass and Denise giving resignation letters, even Teresa the reporter was ok. I may not ship Mike Logan and Liz Rodgers, but you write them well. It's just not my ship. Oh well. Still, everything here and in that story was amazing.)

L

All of it has been fantastic so far, but Alex going Captain of MCS on the uniformed officers who showed up was great. "Whichever makes you move faster." That was great.

L

Woohoo! What a great story. Sorry I didn't review each chapter, but I was so glued to it that I just hit 'next' to go on. It was so good! I love how you wrapped it up and made Gino a sympathetic character in the end. That was cool. Nice character arc for him. Hope to see more of Maas, too. He's a great ally for our superheroes. On to the next story!

LindaC

Hmm, didn't expect that! I thought for sure that he was dirty. Now I have to cast my suspicions elsewhere.

LindaC

I think Banta is in on it. If he wasn't originally on Hassan's payroll like Stahl, he has been since then. The scene in the warehouse with Banta shooting before they got the info they needed was just too fishy. I want Banta to be in on it. Great story!

LindaC

They both should have socked him! What is his deal? Ugh! What a great scene though. Loved the dialogue between Logan/Sumere and Hassan. This was fabulous. Can't wait to read the rest!

LindaC

I love Logan, he's such a smart aleck! Good foil for Goren and Eames, too.

LindaC

This was a cute chapter, really enjoyed the dialogue between Johnny and Mary and then between all of them. I like this Johnny better than the one in the Free series, especially at the beginning of that series.

LindaC

Poor Alex. What a day. You threw the book at her, didn't you?

LindaC

Goren and Logan and a councilman? Oh, my!

LindaC

Another awesome job! I was so stuck in this that I was up all night reading it. I love where you guys took this and once again you are spot on with the characters. I'm sure I am not alone in wanting to see this continue!

Well, I'm hoping they can at least catch him and get rid of him. He's got enough money to hire a good lawyer and who knows what he'll get out of. They need to really drop a net on him, some tar and feathers, something!

I like how they're narrowing this down, piece by piece, but there a lot of unknowns. Really wondering where Hassan is hiding out and who he's watching. Of course, he could have eyes all over the place. I hope they stay safe and at least find him before he finds them. Maas and their secret relationship is pretty much trivial in comparison.

It's strange that he would start with Bobby's apartment. Really curious to hear what he found and what he left behind. Either way, it's not looking good! I hope Maas doesn't find anything like, say, an extra toothbrush. Really hope they catch this guy because they need to sleep again!