this is so utterly beautiful and heartbreaking that i'm here in bed with tears going down my cheeks. you're truly talented- thank you for this

This chapter alone reduced me to tears three different times...I love it. Written beautifully.

Quite a good story. You really got inside their heads. It was impressive. It was also really funny, and even a bit thought provoking. In fact, I liked it so much that I ignored all the grammatical errors in the last chapter, and read it anyway, which is not something I usually do. Good job.

Read the first three chapters. Fantasticness. Just want to say that I'm glad you put in that comment about homosexuality in the 70's. Far too many fanfics treat it like modern day. Anyway, good work; very true to character. Off to read the rest.

This was a great story, overall. I have to admit, I think the last chapter would have been better if it was only Sirius' letter and then maybe a paragraph or two of how Sirius got everything wrong and how he didn't end up with Remus. When Sirius and Remus make up at the end, it seems kind of forced.

Not that it makes the story any less awesome. You described all of the characters so perfectly! I love how Sirius described Lily as Satan, I was laughing so hard!

It was also great and true to Sirius' character about how he's like "Remus is a great kisser. Awkward silence ensures when James lied and Minnie's reading this." ahaha I was cracking up! I'm positive she read it and secretly was shipping them.

Another thing, it kind of irked me that you used apostrephes instead of quotation marks. There's a couple places that need commas or periods that lacked them.

Overall, this was fantasic. Thanks for writing!

-Rileyswag

Your Alice is so funny! Great job.

You've done a remarkable thing- made me pity Peter Pettigrew. Wow... just... I hate him so much but this made me understand him and gah!

You're such a talented writer, you captures Snape perfectly! I was so sad when Lily told James that she loved her and Snape's just standing there thinking that James doesn't know what he has :( Which is a remarkable feat because Jily is my OTP.

I was laughing so hard whilst reading this because Snape is so overdramatic- exactly how I pictured him. "Taunting my sinewy muscles at the thought of it" had me in hysterics. Great job, I'm really looking forward to reading Sirius'.

Lily's ending is so sweet! I love how she has everything planned out about how she'll move in with James and Sirius and then they'll move out when Sirius and Remus live together, ah it's so cute how all of their friends ship Wolfstar without Sirius and Remus knowing bahaha

Aw, I ship BlacKinnon like nobodies buisness (along with Wolfstar... I can't choose!) so reading Marlene's made me so emotional! All the feels, I can't!

Bahaha James is so blunt and in love with Lily. He ships Wolfstar so hard!

AW! I feel so bad for Remus- he thinks that Sirius won't return his feelings :(

Snape's diary was beautiful!

I really enjoyed this. It was different and fun.

This whole story is brilliant - from the inspiration all the way through to the actual writing. Normally, I'd review at the end of the story, but this letter captivated me - the 'code' Severus spoke in and his (or your, whichever) descriptions were stunning :)