interesting story. i take it that this story is not yet finished. i like it a lot. i love arthur's angst. haha. keep it up. and post more soon.

"Shut up Eames, and I'm not little."

"Oh please, how old are you, like 14?"

"I'm 29, how old are you, like 50?"

"Can you two be quiet? We're at a job interview, not day care." Cobb snapped.

HAHAHA this is amazing! Love the dialogue! Great job hon! Keep it coming!

I love Eames. Absolutley love him. This was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more and soon!

Really liking this story.

You know, I've noticed that with Inception fanfic, a lot of stories seem to involve Arthur losing control somehow. I guess it's because in the movie he is this calm and organized guy, but you can see the potential for him to go off the deep end. I really love all the stories where this happens.

Really loving the angst between Arthur and Cobb. Also glad that Eames followed Arthur down. I like Eames:P

Great writing and I will be looking for updates:)

"It's over. I don't care what kind of personal vendetta you have against him, but we're not risking our lives just so you can throw in another punch! Let's just call it as out of our league."

like seriously? and yet they so easily followed Cobbs hero crusade? what? and why is missy so mad at he for? cause he didn't pay enough attention to her for a second?

hypocrites

about the last chp. see, this is the one thing I don't like about these type of Inception fanfics. Cobb becomes the agressor and author, the weak link. author tries to give logic and sense to the dangers and Cobb bites him down by saying he's not being loyal for stating what he thinks and more importantly knows (aka, his JOB). it's f-ing rude and it more than anything pisses me off cause author just takes it. then Cobb goes about like he's alpha male of the pack and continues to insult him while being a hypocrite. Author needs to put Cobb in his place. Who's the best Point- man? who can more then likely kick Cobbs ass in hand to hand combat?... thought so. Cobb wouldn't know shit without Author to feed it to him.

I'm sorry, I've been getting confused with the CM names. Did you forget the real ones or is this suposed to be some other team? Morgan Reid? do you mean Spencer Reid and why is he in the position of Hotchner?

Updateeeeeeee

Ah, awesome! Poor Arthur, he really does let his emotions get on top of him. I'm glad he's finally done something right for the team - can't wait to see what happens next!

UPDATEEEEEEE

Ah, evil cliffhanger! I've noticed that you've started focusing quite a lot on dialogue rather than action; it would be nice to see a bit more description thrown in there. But really good chapter, I look forward to the next one!

Also, I just realised why the title is bothering me. It should be "Suspicion" with a c, not a t )

OMG DID SOMEONE GET SHOT! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON

omg short chapter :) cliffhanger!

Woooow. Suspenseful you have to continue this