Reviews for Unforgivable Mistakes
Guest chapter 17 . 6/4
Man I wanted Harry to be with his ‘girlfriend’
SupaChenz AA chapter 21 . 5/1
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! keep on writing! There was not a lack in the story! Noooooooo!
WTF chapter 5 . 3/8/2019
You keep saying stuff like "It will be" or "Soon", and then you wait for like 5 chapters to actually do anything.
King chapter 2 . 2/4/2019
i love this so far so thank u
SilverDragon1218 chapter 22 . 1/25/2019
Good idea.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/13/2018
L
brookeflower00 chapter 1 . 2/8/2018
I like how they take care of each other
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
There was once a girl named Ashley Halagey, who had a boyfriend named Jack. Jack was the most popular guy in school. The three most popular girls were Courtney, Ashley and Emma. Jack thought Ashley was OK, but he REALLY liked Courtney. Courtney liked Jack also. Well, of course she did. Everyone did!

Ashley and Courtney were worst enemies. Courtney tried to steal Jack away every time she had a chance. One day, Courtney asked Jack if he wanted to go to the movies. Ashley heard everything. What movie, What movie theatre and what time.

That night, Ashley followed Jack and Courtney to the movie theater. Ashley sat right behind them. she watched them get close to each other and kiss. Not only did they kiss, but they practically got it on in the theater.

Courtney asked Jack, “Do you want to come to my place and skip this boring movie?”

He replied, “Hell, yes!”

Ashley followed them home and peeked through Courtney’s window. Jack and Courtney were messing around and Ashley watched the whole thing.

The next day at school Ashley wasn’t there. For the next few days Ashley didn’t show up. A week later, her mother found her dead in her closet. She had committed suicide because she loved Jack so much. Next to Ashley’s dead body was a note.

It read: “My Dearest Jack, I watched you at the movies and at Courtney’s house and I willCONTINUE to watch you. I never thought you would do something like this to me. I really loved you, Jack. I died for you just like Jesus died for us. Always with you, signed Ashley Halagey.

Please send this link to more than 15 people or Ashley will haunt you and try to kill you because she wants everyone to know about how Courtney betrayed her.

What Ashley Halagey did to one person who did not send this…

One girl was looking through her e-mail and she deleted this message, thinking it was just another silly forward. The next day, she was found dead in her bed. Copy and paste the link to all your friends or you will meet the same fate...

mcnv
Sephilim chapter 22 . 12/7/2017
It sucks that she/he didn't finish the story ;-;
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2017
i read ur name thing and it was hilarious I'm totally gonna do some of those
Guest chapter 3 . 10/15/2017
this is good
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
this is pretty good. nice characters. yeah.
TweakyGhostLover chapter 13 . 5/12/2017
YASSSS JAX
I have harry Jackie drake and jake XD XD XD I love it say it out loud
YAY SEVVY
lol jax lol I love how they're getting on AND HE JUST SAYS SHE A STRANGE CHILD XD XD XD
Lol drake
TweakyGhostLover chapter 11 . 5/12/2017
GO draco
Awww SIRIUS
Lol Roland he's like GO on boys get em
Yay blaise
Yasss jax
NOOO
TweakyGhostLover chapter 9 . 5/12/2017
ITS THE LOVEGOODS
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