Fenris was my first too! I completely agree with you.I think I have a thing for elves because Zevran was my favourite on Origins.I can't pick between the two! I think they're both well developed and undeniably hot.I loved this! :) thank you :D

I really enjoyed this story! I actually wrote one somewhat similar, but the nightmare was different, as was the source.
I love how you portrayed the characters... AND I LOVE FENRIS.
BRAVO!

oh, fenris is so caring here

Wonderful. One of the few fanfic's where the author manages to get Fenris' character right. Thank you for this one, it was a pleasure to read :)

I found myself enchanted with Fenris. I had intended on going with Anders first since I felt cheated out of a good romance during Awakening. If I had not been so set on taking the side of the mages the whole way through the game, I would have had Fenris as my first romance choice. On second playthrough, I found his back story to be far more enjoyable than Anders. I missed funny, sarcastic Anders, and even though he was still there in spirit, he had been lost behind Vengeance.

Fenris was new. Fenris was a character that I had not thought to see in Dragon Age at all. The scenario you placed him in with fem. Hawke is one that I can see. I enjoyed your characterization, and I wish I could have seen more emotional moments like this inside of the game itself.