Reviews for Altered States
uchihasfuck chapter 19 . 1/31/2019
HE SAID IT SKSKSKSKKSKSKS AHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM THIS STORY IS SO GOOOD UUUUGGGHHH
Guest chapter 27 . 9/15/2017
This story was downright amazing
Butterkisses chapter 15 . 9/1/2017
They say it's better late than never. Anddddd YAAAAAAAY that's one hell of a journey... Reading this fiction did not make me uninterested a single bit. Every passages were greatly constructed. The scenes were greatly describe, emotions were portrayed perfectly and most of all the LEMONSSSS were all AWESOMMMMME. So as a reader that was blessed to experience your work I am pleased to say that you've done a really really wonderful job ! Thousand kudos for yaaaa :-) :-) :-) :-)
DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 27 . 6/22/2017
ok, I got that one! I had to look up tossed salad, but I definitely got the cream pie.
DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
*pre-chapter (autocorrect is like a sour patch kid)
DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
Your pre-approval text is always so witty and punny. I love it! (oh, and the story too, of course)
ahans1b chapter 27 . 4/11/2017
This story is so good! Very VERY HOT! Some of the best lemons I have read. And plenty of them towards the end. Every chapter was well written.
emowoods205 chapter 27 . 2/21/2017
I fucking loved this there was a good mix of sex fluff and reality
and this book has by far the most Lemon/Limes I've seen in one book in awhile
loved it hope you make more and continue writing
Kokoa Kirkland chapter 27 . 10/9/2016
I love it seriously.
Liasid chapter 27 . 8/14/2016
I really enjoyed this story. It is hard to find a good Sasunaru fic where Naruto isn't all weak and "girly".

Your writing style is very nice too. Descriptive without being too wordy. Plus the sex scenes are really hot ;)
sapphire80 chapter 27 . 7/22/2016
well that was quite a story! I really liked it from start to finish, the only thing missing was them switching up, the way you portray Naruto confident and strong, an equal as well as hinting all the time that Sasuke might like it with the rimming, Naruto taking control etc it just begged for a one time or every once in a while Naruto should top shrugs it just made Sasuke seem selfish which is at odds with how much he loves Naruto, anyway! I enjoyed and thanks for sharing :)
sapphire80 chapter 16 . 7/21/2016
sighs at the selfish answer, story is going well but this is always a pet peeve of mine, I prefer switch ups, this seme/uke thinking annoys me so much xD I am not saying they can't have a preference but you can at least say you will give it a try for the one you are supposedly in love with -_-
Guest chapter 27 . 7/18/2016
This story was on point!
jj chapter 27 . 2/22/2016
re read still like
fan chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Sorry posted wrong review.
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