I feel like Bella was the second choice...the rebound.

This story was gross. I don't mean your writing, just the plot.

Bella deserves better than Kate's leftovers. I'm not a Jacob fan, but he would have been a better option.

I know Kate is Edward's wife, but I'm disgusted that he had sex with her while Bella was there.

This chapter was beautifully written, but so sad! I loved this story!

This Kate is wonderful! I love her, and her attitude. She is so unselfish and caring. I hope Edward will agree to this once Kate tells him!

Oops! Big mistake, Edward!

I find it a little bit disturbing that Bella is staying at the farm as unpaid worker, I don't count food and lodging since that is also provided to slaves. And now Kate is asking her to promise to continue doing labor for free, and thus forego making a family of her own?

I've heard of worse practices. A lot of white hippies bury their afterbirth in the garden or eat it or make some sort of drink out of it because it's supposedly very nutritional. Some people dry up the umbilical cord and just keep it in a box. Crazy white people I guess.

I love how kate is "attempting" to set bella and Edward up...but apparently she only wants that to happen AFTER shes dead. Cause shes still fucking Edward, knowing that bella can fucking hear them. Kate is one nasty bitch. It seems to me that all that whore cares about is that alice has a mother figure. She doesn't care about bella at all. And its pretty weird that she knows Edward loves bella and still offers herself up to him like the hoe she is. I fucking hate kate in this story. Shes nasty.

Ya, I really hate the wifes planning here. Kate can just fuck off. I don't want to hear another word from her.

I REALLY don't like that the tribe just ditched bella. And I HATE that Kate seems to be paving the way for bella and Edward to be together. I also hate that Edward has a kid with kate of all damn people. Bella should never have to play step mommy to a denali whores child. And I cant understand why bella would even like edwrd after the months of him treating her like shit.

Just read this story for the second time. Loved it all over again!

I more than like this, that's for sure. I love this. Thanks for sharing this. What's not to love about this? Western, daddyward, hot scenes, lots of babies Masen, romantic, etc

I very enjoyed reading this, it's unique and well written, and I couldn't seem to put my tablet down. I'm so looking forward to reading your other work.

Ooh this last chapter made me cry, you're so good ;)

I don't understand why Bella and Little Wolf speak so stilted when they speak in their own language?