Very well done i always enjoy your stories!

Yes! Sequel please!

Amazing writing! Very well done!

Brilliant!

I think that was absolutely beautiful. I love reading books and playing games and to be able to combine them is a wonderful talent. You really are able to pull the reading into what your telling - please do continue.

Still plan on writing some more?

*0* oh nice again!

*-* oh man this was so well-written; And I just started playing DA2 and aiming for Fenris but man he can be difficult but getting there :3 Im at where I refused to Merril the piece of that mirror for her quest

Your Hawke sounds like a very interesting character. I'd like to read more about her. I just wished you'd called her something, not just Hawke. But it was a very nice conclusion.

Very nice and dynamic! I like your take on Anders and the insight about Fenris. I must admit it made me wonder why Fenris never attacks Anders when Hawke is not around. There's more to him than meets the eye, and your reading of his character is very interesting.

I just read this and it was absolutely beautiful! You captured Fenris's character very well! (He's my favorite btw). Gorgeous!

Simply amazing. The emotions and personalities were well-crafted and well-handled. If I weren't in a public area, I'm sure I would have shed a tear or two.

I think that caught Fenris perfectly

sequel! yes, you are an excellent writer. expressed the emotions very well.

i love the issues and emotional range put into this.

Absolutely beautiful.

Personally, I'd love to see a sequel to this. But obviously the choice is yours.

Keep up the good work.