Reviews for William's Break
shadowking1701 chapter 6 . 3/4/2018
Well damn! That is an interesting turn of events! For William to be Xana is something that I did not expect! So if William is Xana does that mean he can control the monsters? Also, How will Xana attack now? These are interesting questions! I can not wait to see what happens!
witchinmoonlight chapter 6 . 1/15/2018
I know it's been years, but I hope you can continue...
samarlevi15 chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Please... I beg you ... Just update your wonderful story... It means a lot for me
Guest chapter 6 . 4/16/2016
Been waiting on this cliffhanger for 5 years. A shame because this fic was off to a great start.
froggirl12g chapter 6 . 4/12/2016
2016 and he still hasn't updated since apr 1 2011 that's what my thing says it's never comming out.
I'll make a fanfic to finish this one cause I really want an ending for this story and I know it'll never come five years later. Also it says it was uploaded in march 15 updated on apr 1 2011 that means that you wrote FIVE chapters in one month and said that you're gonna make more and it's FIVE YEARS later! WHAT THE HECK! But still best story I've ever read even if you're not making more suprise me and pls do it it's been five years. I really want to see more from you even if you;re not working on this anymore (;_;)
The Magnificent Pickle Fairy chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
This is AMAZING. LIKE REALLY REALLY AMAZING. i really hope you'll update, it's great.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2012
VK:
This story is AWESOME!
CrimsonShadow345 chapter 6 . 4/28/2012
I have to say I really enjoyed this, please continue
0myao chapter 6 . 4/13/2012
It seems like you haven't been online for a long time, so I don't even know if you're writing the story anymore. If you do read this, please, continue with the story if you can. If you can't, I guess that's understandable.

I really like your story. It reveals William and Yumi's relationship in another way that hasn't really been written before. Especially with that cliffhanger at the end of chapter 6. I mean, how will their relationship work out with something like that. Despite what had happened to William in the beginning, I found his "innocent" personality very...funny. haha. You have one of the only few continuous stories involving this as the main couple, so if you are around, I hope you continue! (:
ElementofHeart chapter 6 . 4/1/2012
OMG! THIS STORY IS SUPPPPPA AWESOME THE BEST WILLIAMXYUMI FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ. PLZ WRITE MORE! I BEG YOU PLZ!
Chinkypinai chapter 6 . 1/2/2012
Update please

The story just got better!
Fanfictions4ever chapter 6 . 9/13/2011
u should finish this its very well written and love the plot, i hope to see more yumixwilliam time an rivalery wit ulreich bumass ok c u soon
Warsagonax chapter 6 . 4/1/2011
I think he said that in "The Secret", when he was questioning Yumi after she left him in front of her house in order to respond to a "XANA's Attacking!" call.

Anyway, I like how the story is developing- keep it up, and I hope to hear more from you soon. :)
MoonlitxAngel chapter 6 . 4/1/2011
That's a pretty big shocker. XD I like William like that, though. XD

I don't remember what episode that was... Hmm...

Can't wait for the next one! x3
MoonlitxAngel chapter 5 . 3/24/2011
I'm definitely a suspense lover. XD I can't wait until you update! x3

~MoonlitxAngel
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