Reviews for Happy Birthday Italian Twins |
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Jessi-Kun chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 Very cool. |
kayla chapter 1 . 7/22/2014 Dnawwwwww |
HeavenCakes chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 This was so adorable! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014 they are not twins |
Ximena Akemi Takahashi chapter 1 . 10/14/2012 is very cute thaks |
fujikawaii10346 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011 Bawww! adowable! haha. sorry for lack of capizalization, this phone is fairly hard to type on. so... overall great story! but i saw that it could use some work on staying in the past, or present tense, if you want to use that instead. also, the end seemed a little rushed... other than that, just the usual commas and stuff to make it flow a little better. i would gladly help you with it, since i have a lack of beta prodjects right now... haha, butiys your choice. once again, great story |