Reviews for Happy Birthday Italian Twins
Jessi-Kun chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Very cool.
kayla chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Dnawwwwww
HeavenCakes chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
This was so adorable!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
they are not twins
Ximena Akemi Takahashi chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
is very cute thaks
fujikawaii10346 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Bawww! adowable! haha. sorry for lack of capizalization, this phone is fairly hard to type on.

so... overall great story! but i saw that it could use some work on staying in the past, or present tense, if you want to use that instead. also, the end seemed a little rushed... other than that, just the usual commas and stuff to make it flow a little better. i would gladly help you with it, since i have a lack of beta prodjects right now... haha, butiys your choice. once again, great story