Reviews for Naruto the Ultimate Lifeform
robert krause chapter 9 . 8/11
when before doing it now and Naruto had keeping a were house when he keeping some odds of star ships sets 300 form star wars and 29 star trek , when some living size dolls grils now, when in the cap office Naruto had keeping his office it now, when the block in under town is Naruto own co is it now, when be on the go now, CP hacker and super it now, Naruto keeping a black book of foes and some old army s and others stuff too, in killer joys Naruto own team is him as team comer and the head of it now, when some out star wars like 2 twin grils both blue , when the red a ex spy and hit gril , and green one now his 1 officer , when others form dc comics slaves earth , and black earth a outlaw rule it and Naruto took them all out a big eyes balls hit men and killer is no the wall now the eyes is out now, and his on the wall now be cut off when Naruto had stood him out and sword out he cut it off now and his tools and others stuff is no the wall now , when the ship is now killer joys now,
robert krause chapter 8 . 8/11
sir i Robert Krause like and love seeing the look his old foe and team mat is sill living no now , 2 his in Naruto new vaillge too, as for the fan gril sarkura i Robert Krause well like to seeing her get big to get out of the fan gril stuff now, and she is now Naruto wife and lover and co cap and 2 head of the killer joys a body huthers team and co too, when the 2 had living in a were houses in the red lights now, sir i get it out of 2 life when you can took you time ship down to a were house shop to fix it now, need to seeing it in 2 life sir it is cool
robert krause chapter 10 . 6/1
Minato had get his own house on the west part of the vaillge when he living in it a 2 floor fart house and it is more quit then his old house in the Lunakage house a super size twin home with his old rooms and Naruto own suit house , when living here Minato had his old team pics on the wall both his own tame with Jiraiya and co then his own tame when the last boy in it get black looking now , when think of his wife now , were then her pic is on his desk now , and the old vests in a glass case too ,when siting in the home now , it times meeting up with jiraiya like old pas , when Tsuande had her house like Minato she too had team pics on the wall , and she had old vests too , wen she had seeing star ships of all kinds now , even a air cy like red Naruto had owner ship of ,
robert krause chapter 4 . 6/1
when Naruto had his home now in the vaillge like out of star trek like cap bill s, had when cap had his office /bedroom on the wall is art of s-class bad guys and woman like be took out by him and old star ships stuff too , when the chir he had it is looking like a war ship hull desk and when the chir is out of star wars , when he sit in it he running his bouny huther co form here , when the were house is home now , on the others room is the tory room of s class bad guys old stuff swords and bag and a body in a black box like with the sound loge into it and bones on the dead men own looking now and glass be took out , now , as for old star ships form others reams Naruto be to , even a pot like ship with #4909 b 1 on it , he had for when , he sleeping in it on the base now ,
robert krause chapter 3 . 6/1
when before the battle vs the others was made to be Naruto had be to the red lights bar and was win money form it and when up floor he find the under a bed his old box of stuff he had when his was 7 or 8 he living in here before the bar was under a new owners , it had old dice 12 to40 of them , cards and a black book name black jack a thief book , he had for when , and when put them away now , he get to workings now and when get out he be by the bets office put down the money he win in the bars and it for him vs others , when others vs him , when he doing win it all and the money he took too , when get out with it all , he had used the money for a were house in waves for when keeping his war stuff ,lock away now , Naruto call up a star ship juke shop keeping a men in a old rainbow hat , had show him old star ships up for under when find one he get a old tank like ship with guns on the top and end when the ship was good he took it and when used it for long time jobs form the slaves earth in dc when ships of all kinds of it his now and slaves grils and woman join up now to the moon light vaillge , even when find out of ships he had sell them off and get the money form it too made his base in under town city and his officers open up now , a cave like home now ,
robert krause chapter 1 . 11/21/2019
when Naruto had be to others parts of earths were slaves had sell off to rich and powerful men and woman ,one time Naruto took out a slvers earth off and took it is slaves grils form it and made his star ship staff offices and his new famelmy and when them is others star ships some Naruto keep used in his job and others he used to with his new vaillge the moon light , like his bed room and a were house he keep as office/men cave /2 bed room . like #606 a former battle star ship now his own now.
omegaderose chapter 2 . 9/10/2019
his name is AZMUTH WITHOUT I IN HIS NAME IDIOT
robert krause chapter 3 . 7/21/2019
when sir i Robert Krause think i had a feeling on who is in the large gold coffin sir it is his dad the 4 one is in it , if i Robert Krause well doing the coffin of the founder of the sound vaillge not the gold coffin sir like the 4 had but of my little pony with rainbow dash and some others on it and had my clones put it into the same way of my dad old one was into it now , as for the boy and gril on his tame the 2 had it came to them for why the 2 had doing to him for a long time . PS sir this not samping you for helping Naruto and others fan fiction who were my favorites made Naruto life good and happy too,
robert krause chapter 6 . 6/8/2019
when Naruto had get a old used ware house west part of the vaillge he find when on the job took out a outlaw brothers out and when looking it now is now his own men cave home and cub size offices too , when on the wall is men woman and some time boys and grils bad ones he took out and art form it is now on it now , the time he had misfits was is name now, one time he living into it now, even a old war pony is in too, now with wings no it too, wall now, were meeting a big size pony guy name Ray Roy ford Naruto side kid and one he keeping too , big size muslces on the pony and super powers too, the 2 had get more war ships both star wars to battle star , he now get a home on the west part of city now , were others in the tame Naruto part as one was odds balls even a elf woman name Ann Leroy kid fox ,is odd too, the 3 one now, and some others too, Naruto meeting when working in the co now , like moon nights a warrior too,
linkiepie2214 chapter 10 . 5/23/2019
this was a fun story to read, but to me it same a bit to rush and the ending come to fast if you ever try to remake this please make it longer and beside some spelling and grimmer errors that is all and I enjoy this story.
until I comment angina :)
robert krause chapter 10 . 5/16/2019
when Naruto had be working on his vaillge now time it was long and times now , the ex vaillge top offices trying to bully into new offices get took out for Naruto and the lord of fire had a little meeting on the ex ones who had jobs before ,and he saying to the men ,lord of fire my vaillge i made is not to be like the old vaillge the 1 and 2 hokle made is not be used by them as both a money made or the vaillge top offices mebers too get set in not with this vaillge sir ,so the kage is the boss here not the vaillge offices and it is my way of think do not let them came here with them blood money ,sir when think of it the lord of fire had to go for Naruto was right about it , 2 his ways of the top offices was mix of men and woman who Naruto had get and find too , help them too , now living it now ,
robert kruase chapter 9 . 5/16/2019
sir in the way Naruto and his dad had made the vaillge in the moon why not let the own some others homes one when his dad had one for when he had some art of his wife and some old books too ,a upsides bed room and 2 office too, his son had a old ware house he made into his co the chamming co when Naruto had his bed room and books room ,as will some old war ships he took out and now is on the wall be took out by him , one time his old pas, was looking about seeing the old war ships on the wall and think Naruto was a son of gun and powerful too,
fluttershywinde chapter 10 . 4/9/2019
Well done
Guest chapter 9 . 3/28/2019
Even sasuke can take down this dipshit, (and I hate giving props to an uchiha).. but this is EZ... Everyone on the PLANET can end him, even sakura! Vilgax is A JOKE to anime! He nowhere NEAR strong enough! It's like making lex luthor a villian here.. He's be killed within 24 hours of showing his face! By SOMEBODY, (hunter nins, assassins, bounty hunters, gangs, thugs, bandits, a village wanting him dead...etc).. this is NOT a world for the weak...It's murder.. Like BIG TIME, even the "good guys" are hired mercs... Vilgax and even ben have NO PLACE IN IT, it's far too deadly.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/28/2019
"VILGAX sees everyone on the fucking planet has powers the dwarf his own and runs in TERROR".. that would make more sense... Naruto with each alien can MAYBE mimic ONE bloodline, a lot of them and sure he's a bad-ass... But squid boy? He's SOOOO outclassed. BY EVERYONE!
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