I thought it was bella to be honest.

:( Every good story is abondaned;( I Really think that you should continue... This is an amazing story and I've been sad to find out you've lost interest, but just to let you know, I haven't. This story is so amazing that i had to take a couple hours to read it all. This will be my last review, and this story was truley the best story on fanfiction. I can't explain how perfect this story was. The plot is unpredictable, twists and turns, great grammar, and most of all the mystery no one could imagine!
If your even reading this, please PM me back. I will truely miss this story and won't read the adoption of it. It wouldn't be the same. I loved this story while it lasted!

-Em

Aww;( I really hoped this was going to be one of the stories that I got to finish:( Please continue and don't edit anything! The story is amazing the way it is! What were you thinking when writing this story? I can tell you. AN AMAZING IDEA!

-Em

AMAZZZZIING! This story just gets better and better!

Heyy! As I said before i love this story, I just wish that there wasn't a whole witch thing. I think that it should have been the evil spirit of Bella coming to haunt them, and tried to kill them. Just my thoughts! Love this story!

-Em

I LOVE your story! I can't stop reading! The only thing that was confusing was the part where Cleo jumped up and dove into the water. Doesn't she still have a broken ankle? Did I miss somthing?

-Em

hi if you ever read this hopefully you do since chucksaysgrrr didn't continue the story can I, I really love the story please I will give you all the credit

Chucksaysgrrr didn't continue the story too bad such a good story has to go to waste :( I really liked the story it was interesting expecislly the suspense hopefully one day somebody will continue from we're you left off I'm just sad to see a good great awesome story not have an official ending I always wondered and still do who was b and who killed Bella :( please continue anyone ? :)

Hey, awesome story :) I was wondering if ChuckSaysGrrr has continued the story? I can't find the story and am desperate to read it :D The note to ur mom was so nice :')

shreya

Thanks everyone for your kind words!

Roselilly: I'll PM you the link. If anyone else can't figure out the link, PM me.

The link isent working for her profile! Link?!

Hey there, I have never written a review on this website before, so please excuse me. In fact the only thing I have ever done on this website is read things, apart from once. That one time I sent you a pm, or is it dm on here, asking if you were ever going to return to this story. You were very nice and I can't say I'm not dissapointed but I wanted to thank you for what you did write. I enjoyed it and if you do make a new account to write I know that I'd follow you, I mean you can only improve as a writer and if I thought this was good then what's next eh? But seriously this was a great idea and i'm sure that if you write again they will also be great. So thank you :)

What!? This chapters full of suprises...

awwww i'll miss your writing so much, this story always brightened my day :] I understand though why you're leaving, and I wish you the best! And what a wonderful note you wrote about your mother, so sweet! Have a very nice rest of summer :] You can PM me for anything! Thanks so much for writing such an awesome story!