Hmm, right.

Liked the concept and good mini story but either your writing style kept making me get lost, being not so sure who tali and who shepard is and make sure you say when they have left and gone somewhere else. Did like it though :)

Miranda isn't that much of a bigot, not really. Then again, this was from Tali's perspective, so i can hardly blame you.

Good work.

I'm a sucker for Tali and Shepard romance.

Could you maybe do a sequel in which it comes to a head and Tali and Shep have a mini argument and then Shepard has to make it up to her...

Reviewing now because I didn't have time to finish last time...I get that this is meant to leave some lingering questions, but it's almost frustrating trying to figure it out. :P

So what is this then? Is Shepard some sort of a player or what? It was well-written for a fan-fiction, but I don't really get it.