BEAUTIFUL !

You got some facts totally wrong. I think you were basing this off of the movie or something because the descriptions you had for number 8 7 and 5 were totally wrong and its pissing me off that you wouldn't find the correct facts about an amazing book series. Other things were wrong also. But other than those giant problems that bother me so much, the story was cute

This is a really good story i was just reading through random stories on fan fiction and matching random people but this was the best one-shot i have come across so far

Its nice about that prequel I hope its as good as this

Very cute

That was amazing! I usually have to look for a long time before I find a oneshot that I want to read, but this was the first one I tried and it was wonderful. I'm going to have to read She's Yours now. And add this to my favorites.

Love love love this story. its great.

Definitely keep writing! That was adorable!

SHANNON! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WRITING ONE OF THEM WEIRD STORIES BOUT THE BEST BOOK/MOVIE EVER? I'm so ashamed lol I'm gonna read it anyways. sorry for reviewing but i can't message you till tomorrow.

so sweet cute and beautiful !

The only thing I didn't like was the part where you copied word for word from Avatar: the last Airbender. You know the episode The Awakening, where Katara confronts her dad about leaving? Because Aang left and she was mad and compared it to her dad? Well yeah I think that part ruined the story.

But honestly, the rest of it was really good. I liked it alot.

hope you like it….if not I really don't care :] I liked that last line LOL but no worries, i and i'm sure many others too, LOVED it! I especially like the way Sarah writes daily letters to John and how she almost, ALMOST but not quite, gave up on him ever coming back...its only human of her to feel that way. So, since you've stated you're writing another story...i'm getting all excited and TOTALLY looking forward to reading Sarah and John are awesome together (i'm still sad that Pettygron split up)