First of all, your story is interesting and is an amazing peice of work. Though the mistrust that Danny has in Sam and Tucker and vice versa feels a bit unreal since they're a really close group of friends and I feel that they would have more trust and communicate with each other. I did enjoy the story while it lasted. Great job

"Twist in plot, Damsel has been killed by innocent pedestrian" so Sam...so perfect...burst out laughing

Has anyone adopted it yet?

I have a feeling that Jeremy is an evil ghost and I'm sorry but I think lancer should choose Jeremy's play idea I find it to be brilliant!

I must let you know chapter 3 is hilarious!

NOOOOO! I'll adopt it!

It's kind of a bummer that you stopped. I kind of liked the story because of the drama that was happening. I would like to see a summary of how it would have gone and ended.

Grrr... I really liked this one too...

This story is pretty good :O I really really wanna know what happened. :O Plus I loved the interaction between Danny and Tucker :O Could ya let me know what happened? :O Hope you'll get back to this story in the future though :3

Oh my god PAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Vlad as 'Count Ghoulenstien'. Must tell the fruitloop that. Better insult name to call him than just the usual 'fruitloop'...nah, fruitloop is classic. Though I'm still going to mention that Lancer called him Count Ghoulenstein. XD

And funny. Twist in plot. Damsel has been killed by innocent pedestrian. Made me laugh so hard that my sister came to check on me to make sure I hadn't gone insane. :)

I love this story. Please update this story soon.

update!

OMFG! please please please update NOW! this story is amazing! I hope it's a reveal fic :D

I loved this story! Sad its over but it was amazinggg(:

This story is funny, keep writing, but please try and say who said this and who said that, keep up the good work