Very emotional and exciting as well as a little sad, but hopeful and symbolic in the end. You touch a lot of feelings and they all come to the reader. Very talented. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Sorry for my english

What an amazing story. You are extremely talented, and I wanted to thank you for taking the time to write this little gem. I enjoyed it immensely.

Great story! I particularly loved how you ended it - that's just such a brilliant ending!

Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read a little sad in places

This ending is one of the best FanFiction stories for the Mentalist I've read (I've read hundreds - really) it's so feel even though Jane nearly died. Thank you very much for writing this story!

It's so very sad when Lisbon cries.

This is such a great story. You did promise Jane pain and you have certainly delivered.

You've laid out the scene so well with the blooming jacaranda tree and beautiful yet dead young woman beneath it. I just know this will be an interest case!

You write this feeling that Teresa has so well - I recognize it but am not sure what it is. What a good beginning - I'm definitely hooked.

Aww, the end of the story was sooo sweet :33
Really got work, an nice story -
Give greetings to Lyle too!

aww, that was sweet, that they did that for Jane...

Lovely turn of phrase: "...giving birth to the responsibility that was theirs for years to come."

Ahhh, what a wonderful ending for this story. It brought a small, albeit very real, smile to my lips and a warm fuzzy feel to my heart. I loved it!

"If you're queasy, don't read. If you're hot and bothered, don't read."
You sound like you're talking about my last bout with the flu.

Good story.
Loved when Lisbon found Jane's wallet and her talk with Cho.