This was an interesting take. Well done

Oh this story is so painful. You captured the tension between Heero and Relena's relationship perfectly. The want, the need, the love. It's perfect as a one-shot but darn it, I want my happy ending. Hehe. I really hope those two sort it out. Cheers! You are such a gifted writer. Love it!

amazing. Absolutley amazing.

I can't believe you did not let them go through with it... I understand exactly how Heero must be feeling right now. Hahah
I love your stories and I don't know why I had not favourited you sooner. That must be because I usually read them at your LJ page. I wouldn't miss the full versions of them for the world.
Thanks for your hard work! :)

This is one of the few lemons that really got to me. You write beautifully. You've captured so much in this one-shot than many of those I've read before. And the characterization is flawless; I wish more GW fics were written this way.

This goes directly to my favorites list. I do home you write more 1xR stories soon.

I got very emotional reading this, in my feelings for Relena. She strives to make herself to be everything, and this piece shows how exhausting it is no matter if its a strength or a shortcoming. The part where she feels so much she can't fathom having room for another person if she felt half of it again, let alone lying about it, made her loneliness ache. As always, I adore how symbiotic and Heero and relena are, and the very organic problems that actually arise from that. No one writes them like you do, that is the blessing of this fandom and its curse.

Absolutely stunning. You are a true story-teller - rich with emotion, devastatingly honest. It's so easy to cheapen characters like Heero and Relena when you lack the insight, but YOU, my dear... all of your Gundam Wing pieces have moved me and given me such a greater appreciation for the way the series ended.

I sincerely hope you always continue writing, whatever genre and whatever medium. Just reading a few of the reviews left before me, I'm sure you know how many people you've inspired.

All the best,
- Lynn.

Blue ball city for Heero haha

Indeed. It has been so long since I read one of your amazing stories, Zap. This was wonderful. Relena did the right thing, but wow did that hurt. Your writing is as elegant and moving as ever.

PS: of course I haven't read you other fics, but it is what I'll do from now. (unbelievable that in one you had 1300 review in 13 chapters... that is a record, girl!)

OH-MY-GOD. I mean, oh my... what! I have read several 1xR fanfictions in my life but... what! That is so far the best one I have ever read! Girl, this fic is so INTENSE. Do you know when you can feel what the character feels? All the pain? That was it. Tense and intense. If I were more fluent in english, I might describe better all I felt. Extremely well written, I'm sure you wrote this based on your own life.

And of course, it is a very sad story. Cause we understand his side although it not seem fair. (Probably, if I were in relena's place, I would have made love with him. I probably would feel better had done once in life than never do and never know how it would be... in the case she give up of him and go find another person.) And the fact that there is no end...made everything be even more sad for the readers. And I totally understand this "no end", because I can't imagine an end for a story like this. Sadly.

xoxo

WHYYYYYYYY did you end it like that ughhhh it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOOOOOD and then you ended it like ahh i feel like crying i was getting so into it why did you end it like that? pleaseee please idk put like another chapter to it or something it was sooo good and then it stopped sighh

I always love reading your Relena Heero stories, and this one did not disappoint me :)

This is sad! TT Why can't they be together? Anyways, it's wonderfully written; but just a little tweaking on the dialogue exchanges.

Such a bittersweet and wonderfully written story! It had me tearing up and yet I couldn't help but feel hopeful at the end. I hope that one day they are able to find their paradise.