Reviews for melted
Biancachu chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
This was really nice and prettyyy
Butterfree chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
And just as you enjoyed writing this piece, I really enjoyed reading it! I'm kind of shocked that you say that you have a bigger affinity for stories that are angsty. I wouldn't be able to tell with how well you adopted the hopeful tone here and stuck to it throughout. I think my favourite part definitely has to be that little show of how and why Green was the only one who could get through to Red and convince him to see his mother. Him getting his first win in that manner was such a perfect ending to a chapter in their rivalry and I really wish it happened in canon.

~ Queenie
Princess Uchiha.0223 chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
This was such a beautiful piece! The characterization, the detail, the build-up. .all of it was top notch. Thank you for such an amazing story :)
abandoned23456 chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
This story actually made me cry. I'm honestly so enamoured with your writing. Keep up the good work!
shiny kittens chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Awwwww,
that's all i can say about this.
I've spent the entire day reading your storys and I
can say that you've earned yourself the rightfull place on my favorite authors list.
Thanks for being an awesome writer,
shiny
Anon chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
I really love this! All of your fanfics are really well-written, and I hope you have a good day!
theSardonyx chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
Thrice I thought it was finished, twice I was wrong. Weirdly enough, I find that I don't really mind being wrong in this case.

Tragedy and angst is the life if Red Green Leaf stories, it seems. But yes, it's nice to add that little ray of light sometimes.

Write on.!
Yuna
The Cowardly Mechanic chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
i loved it.
hikarinayoshi chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
this was kinda nice!
AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
This story is absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed every single minute of it. You are a talented author :)
Kamy-chan chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
it was a really nice story! i hope to find more of this, or a sequel! :)
XxCandiigrlszxX chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
This was lovely. You really captured everything well.
sea-salt kisses chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Excellent. I think this was the best ending this story could have had. I love how Green only understood his feelings at the end. Nicely done.
Ember chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
The plot is awesome! I felt so sad for them but at the end it gave me a warm feeling. Being alive and with the people you love is really a great thing. A really encouraging piece, thank you.
FRUITT chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I rarely review/comment anything, but this was a must. I had to even add this to my favs. That awesome this fic was.

I can't really put in the words how much I liked this. : D Keep on writing, you talented Kuruk!
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