heyyyy so I'm loving the story so far, but the running requirement is very outlandish. no one has run a 3 minute mile yet and also current army ranger requirements for running are 5 miles in 40 minutes or less, not 15 minutes.

You’re a great story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. There’s no way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to passing the Rangeman physical exam in two weeks. And running 3 miles in 5 minutes is physically impossible considering the world record for a woman running one mile is over 4 minutes

You’re a good story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. No way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to a Rangeman ready in two week. And running 5 miles in fifteen minutes is physically impossible. The world record for a woman running one mile is over

Stephanie’s female so it would be Angelita with an A, not O.

holy crap what a place to end it. I was so happy Morelli and Helen got theirs in the end. I didnt feel bad at all for her father as he wasnt really one anyway. great story

Wow. They are lucky no one else caught the bullet that got Cal!

Lol. Tank let Morelli go alright.

How can she question herself and think she is a burden?!

Oh. I just thought of something.
I'm surprised Doug didn't tell the cops the Rangemen were lying in parts.
Nah! He knew he'd be dead and gone in a minute.

Ugh! So many f words! Through the whole story.

I'm glad things did not end ugly with Val.

Omg that was disgusting what Doug did and he said he did it to other women too.

She creamed Joyce.

Thank goodness the mm were close enough and strong enough to keep her from Joe!
I'm sure he will be going to a holding cell now!

Uh oh!
First Doug, now Val. Soon Morelli! They sure know how to spoil the fun.

It's going to get interesting mighty quick!

I loved Val's point of view. I hope she can get out from under Helen's thumb. Too bad she doesn't know about her cheating ways. If Joe ever approached her I hope she laughs in his face!

Girls night out should be very interesting!

Loved all the memories the guys had, except Doug, then the episode with Hal.
Then smut! Always good.
Then all the vehicles, and she beat Les!
Fun chapter.

They found the guy delivered the package and are pretty sure it came from Joe.

Lol.
They cleaned up Stark street which would normally take years, if ever.

Sick! Sick! Sick!
Morelli has so lost his mind!

I'm surprised Mike doesn't just disappear while he is still alive.
Doug will deserve what he gets.
He is a chauvenist, cry baby like Joe!

Hmm.
Helen has been quiet too.

Soon they will figure out the newbies are spilling secrets, and to Joe!

Her training is going really well.

Joe is too quiet. Usually he is gloating.

Those two guys will be dead meat soon!
They are just too dumb to know it, although I bet Mike was again wishing he should have gone to Tank first after they spoke to Morelli.

They got lesson 1 the hard way the dummies!

Mike better rethink and go to the core team.
Maybe they could protect him from Joe by shipping him off.

Joe is disgusting!
A sick in the head evil creature!