ya know...when i meet justice in the fade he's actually rather easy to get along with...same as i awakening...i think the writers just made him like that all the time to make the ending have more sense

k that kinda makes me want to punch justice in the face.

Spiffy story dear author! I hope to see more!

To be honest, both anders and justices characterizations seed more like their daa counterparts than da2.

A very creative and original story! I applaud you!

Very nice short story. I actually have plans to include quite a bit of Hawke/Justice interaction in the fic I'm working on. I love it when people tackle this curious 3-some in a way that isn't *just* Justice flipping out and yelling at Hawke. I like to see a little bit of *trying* to reason with the spirit, though the yelling is an important, inevitable part as well.

Very nice story! I absolutely detest Justice! I mean, if you're going to time-share a body with a hot man like Anders, or any human for that fact, you'd better learn to be sensitive to the needs of your host. Loving someone is just as important as eating or sleeping to humans. Whenever Justice tries to make Anders forgo the things that are vital to his humanity, he just proves his being a parasite.

Great job on this story! Definitely adding this to my favorites. :)

This was so sad, the contrast between her conversation with Justice and her conversation with Anders was so striking as is her fear of Anders slipping away from her.

I think Justice is narrow-minded by definition and having a conversation with him would be frustrating and futile and you captured that well. Great job. :)

This was painful to read. Please put a warning next time.

Worse pains to read this than to read almost anything else, in my mind.

This is excellent. I love the conversation with Justice. I wish you would continue this.