Hi! I love this story, really I do. I've reread it several times now and find it to be one of my favorites and that spans -all- of my fandoms. I love the pairing or really hints of Romano/Alfred here, the cute interaction of Kuma and America and the brotherly love betwen both sets of 'twins'. I look forward to any and all updates! Oh and the premise here is original and flows ncley together, no forced feel to it! C.H.

I have to read more. This was an awesome chapter. Please please please update again soon! :)

This story hurts my face,I may need surgery to have my smile removed.

America should know who Prussia is. He helped in the American Revolution.

I love this throughly

Take your time with the Tale of the North Americubs, it's wonderful! Very nice take on America and Canada's earlier life :)

Loving the Americubs story! Keep up the great work!

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(I'm just going to sit in bed and bask in your story for awhile. Give my poor keyboard a rest. I mean, this is everything I wanted in a NA bros backstory and then some, because it's got all these little details and feelings and as;dlfkjas;ldkfjs;ldkfjas;dlkfj I'm done.)

Germany on vacation... XD

Aw, Veneziano! Sweet, gullible Veneziano. Lucky Romano is there to look out for you.

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wow, this is...wow.

I imagine the only thing that could make this better is if there was an actual person telling the story. I'd be sitting in the front row, entranced.

"Romano bluffed with no hand and no draw" - ahhhh that explains him pretty well in a lot of situations!

Cowboy!America is definitely one of my favorites incarnations of him. I can see why all the nations would be...interested, heh.

And NA bros, too! This fic is hitting all my favorite scenarios.

Awwww! I love it how you work in little personality traits and quirks so easily, like America's penchant for 'sampling' because he saw it on a tv cooking show! And Veneziano and Canada get along so easily, it's sweet to read them cooking together. Also, Germany cuddling Kumajiro makes the most adorable picture in my head.

Please keep going with this! This is fantastic and I love the story of how the twins came to be. It's beautiful and /really/ really cool!

Oh my maple. I can't. I just. These guys are really special. They are. Words can't describe, but "free pasta," "he touched my balls," and "I have relatives in New York" come really close. XD

I think I may have pulled something laughing! (send maple syrup and fresh pasta, preferably on a polar bear)

*more flailing*

*flails around*

I wish I could leave a coherent review, but mostly I just smiled through this whole chapter and thought, "awww, such cuties!"

And for some reason, Romano's words, "Faster, bastard, faster!" made me snort and choke in a very undignified way. XD

*flails some more*