Hi, i just finished reading your story. First of all, it's pretty awesome and so well written. Great job! Second, is this complete? Just double-checking. Third, does it have a continuation? (Please say yes, please say yes, please say yes).

STILL MY FAVORITE STORY!

PLEASE WRITE MORE FOR LOVE & AMERICAN FOOTBALL! You have completely hooked me from start to finish. You write each character as if you know them personally, and that goes for all of your other stories too! It's too cruel of you to make me fall in love with them and then not finish!

I wish there was more to this because I'd like to know what happened when his uncle showed up and what's going to happen next

Good story

Such a cute story and the ending perfect.

While smut is liked a good plot is better. Stick to your guns. I don't care that ichigo is ooc. It's an AU for God's sake! The storey is great.

So, we're not going to address the whole yakuza situation?

Ilforte needs to get his little princess ass kicked! Bringing all that drama around here when he's not wanted! I can't remember what chapter it was, but I was dyin' at the part where Ichigo was talking about his little demon enjoying Ilforte's humiliation. I was cackling too at that scene.
Oh my god, the way you describe Kensei, he's definitely someone I want to see again! Whew, he's hot. Not with Ichigo though, maybe someone else?
Ichigo and Grimmjow need to make it official! Facebook official, idgaf but theyre boyfriends!

Thank you for the update, I look forward to the next chapter. Glad you have so many other grimmichi fics to read!

I like your story,really intresting

Hi racey! This is the first time I review one of yours stories, but I juts wanted you to know how much I love them and how they change my life for better even if just a little, making me a little happier.. (just for you to know I'm 16 and from Italy, so my language might be a bit sucky - is this even a word?) Anyway, about this story I have little to say, apart of that the fact that it's so moving, and that I like it a lot... I especially love the Grimmjow character, he's smoking hot, waaaay to much for my poor brain.
As much as I despise the fact that you don't update as often as before, we all know you don't like us being pushy, I really hope you decide not to abandon this story, and the other ones you left open (like dirty, that has been, like, the only thing I thought about for a looong time).
I just wanted you to know that I'm sure things for you will be better, and that even if you don't know me, I'd like you to know I cherish you, because, even if in an untraditional way, you're taking responsibility on us yours reader making us feel better, and you know, you're like a firm point, at least in my life, as in "wow, I'm having big problems, I'd like to escape reality for a bit.. let's read some racey stuff, and feel a little happier".
I also know that you might not like my view of you, but I hope you'll do, and decide to answer me, cause I'd really love it. I don't even know if half of what I wrote makes any sense. As much as you'll hate me for saying this to you I'm going to do it anyway: please update soon!

Hello Racey! I have not forgotten about you or your lovely work. I've just been super busy -_-

Anyway, very happy to see another chapter of this awesome story. I've been on the edge of my seat waiting to see what Grimmjow would do with the information his mom is under the yakuza's thumb. I can't wait to see what Mayuri did/is going to do about it as well. My heart went out to Grimmjow when we found out his dad died because of the yakuza. I have to wonder if they came to him and blackmailed him into it, or if he got involved with them before he became a football player. That also makes me wonder how much money is still owed to them by Grimmjow's mother, and if they pay it off, if that will be the end of it (that seems unlikely though). Ugh, so many questions still! But that's what makes it so good ;)

Now...Ichigo. Gah, I kind of wanna smack him. He can't be thinking that way about Kensei! He has Grimmjow right there! Hmmf, boys. Hopefully that doesn't get any more messy that it is right now. But Ilforte is troubling me. Could he just be a possessive, semi-crazy ex? Sure. But there's something that seems off about him to me, and I have to wonder if he has ulterior motives. Could he be working for a rival team? Or the yakuza, perhaps? So odd. And I hope Grimmjow and Ichigo actually talk about the shit that's been going on in their lives recently (mostly Grimm) because that could bite them in the butt later. Ichigo could be used as collateral by the yakuza! Crazy shit happens all the time in your stories, so it's not outside the realm of possibilities ;p

As always, wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more. I need to reread all of the Dirt series, and I want to reread Untrained Heart as well. That's a personal favorite :)

This is so cool. Didn't think those two were EVERYTHING going to get together for a while, and then when it actually happened I thought, nah something has to go wrong here... but it didn't last long (thankfully) hopefully the drama isn't over yet cos I love me some angst. My theory is the yakuza we might want to get grimmjow and decide to go after ichigo for blackmail or something! Or possibly just a happy ending after unc sorts them out. Either way looming forward to the next.

Poor Grimmjow's papa. I hope Ichigo gets to yank Illfort's goddamed hair out!

Final-fucking-ly! I was ready to pull my hair out and jump down my apartment if they decided to not tell each other their feelings "again"! I love this story so much. The author did an excellent job, this story had me by the leash.