Really, really good. Better than I could manage, certainly, and makes me feel a bit silly for some of the things I've claimed about people writing Luna.

10/10

While I like Harry/Ginny stories, more often than not, I've ran into those Harry/Other which make Ginny out to be a cheating bitch. Surprisingly, that's not what you've done in your story, but incredibly self-centered is another trope you've used. Nothing wrong with using tropes, I'm just disappointed that all too often that's how Ginny is written.

Anyways, moving away from my late night rambling, onto the review. I thoroughly enjoyed the tone shift of the story, starting all depressed and moving to happy and once more in love. We see directly from Harry's point of view how his relationship and seasons went on and your story more or less showed the progression between Harry and Luna (Which, while unnecessary to state, does happen to be my favorite pairing in the fandom, even though there isn't much from the books to support it. I just really enjoy how they are written together in fanfics.) from two people who are reconnecting to falling in love.

As a final point, I really enjoyed the epilogue, which brought Luna's father's mythical creature into existence, and having it such that the reason they never found it was because they always went in the summer and it was a winter-oriented creature was a nice touch. Aurora is an adorable name.

As always, keep writing, keep being awesome, and stay safe during these times,
Green

I don't really like romance stories, but I really enjoyed your story . Kudos

A truly amazing and captivating read. Absolutely loved the Quidditch version of Top Gear. The pairing was really natural, loved the way you incorporated the stuff rowling put on pottermore. Thanks a lot for this!

This is both sad and sweet. Recommended.

Great ending. Loved that she finally found the Snorkack and it was friendly. I hope they had many, many, children.

Yeah, but Harry is being too noble and stupid by giving her the house HE bought. If he wanted to be fair, he should have either had her buy him out with a distinct discount, or sell it and divide the money. And the way his memories show it, Ginny was a tad to self-involved to begin with.

Love the ending so much

Eh, but nice.

This has been an alright story, but the constant switching from present and past is pretty annoying.

It seems to be more of Ginny's fault for sure. Harry was just trying his best, going to all her games, didn't get salty when he lost to her, and made her his priority etc. but Ginny doesn't show up to his games, gets extremely salty when she loses, and made the Harpies her priority. Luna is much better for him.

Wonderful story.

Luna doesn’t want Harry to join her, then go back to her own fucking place.

Haha, loved the "Top Gear" parody here. That was my favourite show for the longest time!