Reviews for Hold the Fort
prettykitty473 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This was cute. Totally brought me back to my childhood. You both make a great team.
Aly chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
YEAH!
Kawaaii-SuperHer0 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
lol i love it!
Mimms chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Okay okay. I absolutely loved this. It is amazing and totally hilarious!
But I thought I'd point one line out:
"Oh, carp. Totally forgot about that!"
You wrote carp instead of crap, but I found it just as funny anyway. :D
M chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
I love it you should make another story like this.
Rhianna Park chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This story was hilarious, a sort of late reply but this story was entertaining and made me laugh, the characters were spot-on :) keep writing :)
BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Haha LOL!

Everyone was totally in character!

Was Artemis/Wally interaction Wally WANTING her to play and using reverse psychology or he really did want her gone?

Love it! The entire justice league building a fort... awesome! Especially the scene where they found the team throwing cookies.

I imagine the bit you cut out involved the team looking at each other, and then slowly sinking beneath the boxes.

Keep writing!
ParamoreXO chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Incredible collab! You two work really well together! (: I throughly enjoyed reading this!
KTrevo chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
That was AMAZING!
i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
what else do you use boxes for?
Portrait of a Scribe chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
This is AWESOME! And it should totally find its way into an episode. Excellent work!
it's simply me chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
This was hilarious! A perfect one-shot of pure non-sense and bonding time XD Loved it!
SkyeDonovan chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
This is one of the best YJ fics I've read. My favorite is when Robin says "Join the dark side. We have cookies!" I couldn't stop laughing.
mahlia chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I failed completely as a judge for March by forgetting to review. Feel free to roast me over a fire or jab me with pointy sticks. :)

Cardboard box forts are right up there with blanket forts. I love how this went from a simply, "Hey, let's build a fort" to an all-out war to see who could out-do the other. That competitive nature is something that's really genuine for these guys. Nice work!

The military-speak at the end was effing priceless. "I love the smell of burnt cookie in the morning!" was just hilarious. Talk about taking their fun seriously.

Thanks for accepting the challenge and for submitting this! It was a great read!
blueteacups chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I loved this! Everybody was totally in character and Wally's lines were especially great. :)
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