Aw... Well... That was interesting. XD

Awesome job with the boys, and Smellerbee even. I'm always impressed when people can capture minor characters well. :)

I liked it but that wasn't a real ending. You could have expanded the story into so much more but you stopped it at the most dramatic part.

Nice, never thought of a Zuko Jet pairing but I'm learning to like it, Great Job. _